Comments | uberniftacular: a poem

uberniftacular

a poem

Jul 01, 2004 21:53

For the BoysYou were the first one I saw, the summer before my freshman year ( Read more... )

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Holla back yo! thatwasmyfoot July 1 2004, 19:21:54 UTC

*feels special because she figured out who all of them are* Brilliant poem. No words to fit it as far as description goes. Just...brilliant. Wish I had the motivation to write down what's in my head. Takes guts to share it...
*sobs*
IMMA MISS YOU!!!!!!!!
*hug*
~*Loren

katie92288 July 1 2004, 20:18:55 UTC

Pretty.

Didn't know a single one.... well, maybe one i could figure out...

Nonetheless, very pretty.

uberniftacular July 1 2004, 20:26:28 UTC

which one could you figure out? IM me (my sn is kiniskichick2238) and see if you're right

undertine July 1 2004, 21:20:18 UTC

Deep.

I'm proud.

anonymous July 2 2004, 11:37:49 UTC

I think it's really good! I know who all of them are. :) I feel kind of inspired to write myself, now...

-The OTHER Jenny

My Appearance darkpoet1987 July 3 2004, 03:21:01 UTC

Well, I have not had much to say regarding this poem, aside from the fact that I'm rather fond of it. First of all, because I'm happy to see you posting your thoughts somewhere instead of keeping them inside and forcing me to drag them out of you ( as we have already know, I can and will take drastic measures when I feel the need. Beware, I can tickle much better than that!). Second of all, it's just a good poem. It comes to me as a confused/yearning mood, and you seem to have paralled two men in the 2nd to last stanza, though you told me you didn't mean to. Either way, it's effective. Never doubt yourself, you're an excellant writer, and if you complain about my compliments again... I shall have to slap you with a trout. Good day!
Love ya,
Bryant
The Poet of Darkness