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tyrannicides October 11 2010, 04:42:26 UTC
You know Fernando's a beast.

...But seriously, I want that game so bad. Like, I'd kill a man with little remorse for that game.

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tyrannicides October 11 2010, 13:39:59 UTC
It's hard. I'm pretty much shit at sports games. Sports games and first-person shooters. Which means no gamers really ever take me seriously, ever. Ay yi.

I'm pretty boss at Pokémon

ooooooooo giiiiirl. You wanna start somethin? I'm the master. brb pokewalkin

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influira October 11 2010, 04:54:26 UTC
Somewhere inbetween, he'd found Cesc sleeping on his chest in the dark, nose pressed in his ribs
ahhh i love how that portrays cesc. i don't know. just. lovely.

"I can't believe this," Sergio says, groaning. "Iker saving goals. For Barcelona."

"You don't like Barcelona?" Cesc asks. He looks Iker like he just curbstomped a puppy.

"He's a madridista," Sergio supplies.

Cesc looks at him for a long moment. Then, "I forgive you."
hahahahahah this whole scene made my entire life better.

Cesc crushes his nose in Iker's neck, says something silent against his skin.
aldkfjslkfjalskfjals.

this is just exquisite. honestly, every time you write, it gets better and better. i get so excited when i see you posted! hahahaha. i actually get so embarrassingly happy bc i just. love. this. so much.

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distira October 11 2010, 05:23:06 UTC
I WAS ABOUT TO TEXT YOU ABOUT THIS BUT YOU BEAT ME

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tyrannicides October 11 2010, 13:50:00 UTC
♥ Thank you. I actually almost didn't include the FIFA scene, I felt like it disrupted the flow. I'm glad I did now, haha.

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acchikocchi October 11 2010, 05:03:40 UTC
oh god this just made my miserable day so much better. T_T

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acchikocchi October 11 2010, 05:11:34 UTC
I should probably say more than that. Okay. Things Wot I Liked:

1. Oh, Ricky. I can't decide whether I want to pat him or laugh at him. Someone should tell him to watch out for that #7 bwahahaha.

2. FIFA 11. Words cannot describe my glee. Fernando was the perfect touch. (I'm still waiting for him to show up on campus as a surprise or something, idk. FOR SERGIO'S SAKE. Is it winter break yet.)

3. Cesc looks at him for a long moment. Then, "I forgive you."

aaahahahahaha, how giving of you, Cesc. El Clasico's going to be fun for them. (Where is my Real icon.)

4. The last scene(s). Let's just say submissive Cesc, uh, speaks to me. Eloquently.

In conclusion, moar plz. *_*

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tyrannicides October 11 2010, 13:57:44 UTC
1. Haha, Ricky's pick-up line is like SO I HEARD YOU ARE VERY GOOD AT SOCCER. 8) And Ronaldo's like :|.

2. I'm still waiting for him to show up on campus as a surprise or something, idk.

He will! I have a big thing written with him in the spring. It's so hard the shove him in in the meantime though, hrrg. It's like, I want more Sergio/Fernando in here, but there's only so much you can do when someone is literally in another country.

3. That's basically me and every other friend who watches football ever. Idec what people say, I think Barcelona is the easier team to like. You get so much shiiiiit as a Madrid fan. /martyr

4. ♥ I'm glad it didn't, like, go overboard. I know it could have been way raunchier and everything, but I was hoping it didn't feel too abrupt for the story.

:] Thank you.

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acchikocchi October 11 2010, 19:22:30 UTC
You get so much shiiiiit as a Madrid fan. /martyr

NO, I UNDERSTAND. You totally do! Just because they have, you know, the highest brand value in the world... Ahem.

Hilariously, when I started paying attention to Spanish football, I thought for sure I'd like Barcelona the most because I tend to be partial to underdogs with great traditions and everyone said they were... and then when I got deeper into it, I realized that this season that position was actually Madrid's. Oh, the irony.

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go_for_it_kid October 11 2010, 05:20:33 UTC
After reading this, I'm not very coherent so I won't even atempt to write a long comment, just know that I love reading this, I love your writing, and your little notes at the end make me insanely happy! Love ya!

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tyrannicides October 11 2010, 13:58:50 UTC
♥♥♥ Thank you.

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dgxku October 11 2010, 05:25:44 UTC
Ohmygod.

How did I only just discover this series? I went back and I've now read this from the beginning in one swoop, and just.

Ohmygod.

This is perfect and wonderful, and I'm in absolute awe of your writing, and your simplicity is charming, and your sex is hot, and your disillusioned iker is pitch perfect. And and and I have a million more things to say but they're not even making sense in my head so I all can do is say thankyou thankyou thankyou for this gem.

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tyrannicides October 11 2010, 15:05:18 UTC
in one swoop

Dude, that's like 25,000 words. That's pretty intense. Thank you very much for the read and the very nice comment. ♥

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