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tyrannicides

048. diamond.

Sep 21, 2010 00:50

Nam Mellitus Erat, 048. diamond.
September.

( Iker tries to remember what it's like to be seventeen, to like someone older when four or five years seems like the biggest difference in the world. )

universe: nam mellitus erat, pairing: sergio ramos/fernando torres, character: fernando torres, character: iker casillas, rating: nc-17, fandom: football, character: cesc fabregas, character: sergio ramos, pairing: iker casillas/cesc fabregas

Comments 26

go_for_it_kid September 21 2010, 07:29:40 UTC

I love your Universe!!!! It's so great!!!! Iker is just RAWR!!!! well done, vey well indeed!!

tyrannicides September 23 2010, 15:19:23 UTC

:]]] Thank you.

bossbadger September 21 2010, 09:24:06 UTC

Ohhhh an update! I am loving this story so hard.

tyrannicides September 23 2010, 15:19:39 UTC

8] Thank you.

nanousblues September 21 2010, 15:37:54 UTC

oh... I like that!

tyrannicides September 23 2010, 15:19:52 UTC

:]]] Thank you.

theosakansun September 21 2010, 16:02:18 UTC

How I've managed to miss this is beyond comprehension. Because after reading the other parts + this one, I am now so in love with this universe it's ridiculous.

I've never read a fic with Iker/Cesc as the main pairing before, so perhaps that's why I missed the first two parts of this. But damn, is this good or what? Seriously, this made my day so much better :D

I am such a sucker for college/university aus! And this is one of the better ones I've read in quite a long while.

First of all, I love your Iker. He reminds me quite a bit of myself lmao :P I am really picky about my bananas too...brown ones are gross! But on another note, your Iker seems to be such a sweetheart! He truly cares for Cesc and is not like only trying to take advantage of him because he's younger than him. And I love your Cesc as well :) He seems really cute and I love how you've slowly made the tension between him and Iker disappear!

Iker knows it's because he's suddenly realizing that he just told Iker that him and Fernando are more than cybersex and shaky ( ... )

tyrannicides September 23 2010, 15:23:10 UTC

Brown bananas are a scourge. They're only okay for smoothies, when their taste can be mostly masked by other fruits. Like, when the first little spots occur, they're edible, but after that- ...okay, done talking about brown bananas. BUT I AGREE.

Sergio and Fernando met in Spain! This is my vague idea. Sergio met him there over the summer and they're keeping in touch/trying to make a long-range kind of thing work. Fernando will visit in the spring semester. DOUBLE DATE, YO~

Thank you for this whole comment. It really made my day :]]]].

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tyrannicides September 26 2010, 23:11:36 UTC

Your comments complete me.

Ugh you write about everything I want to try to make their relationship be but doubt about being able to pull off, basically.

(Not at all a skeeve--I was kind of sort of in a relationship like this once but not really at all, so most of it is kind of me thinking, "So what if it's like mine was, except 10 million times more extreme." Basically.)

Ahhh, this comment. I have read lots of incredible sex scenes in this fandom, so all of this paragraph is. Intensely flattering. Thank you.

and the authority/age bits that kinda trailed up in the end of the piece?The next chapter is, like, completely dealing with Iker's you-are-very-young freak-out, so def. I hope it didn't go too far overboard, but that weird tangle of lust, adoration, distance--the three things you mentioned which I think are so key, you know--it comes from the Iker side too. Like, the struggles are the same for both of them, in some ways ( ... )