[Heroes] - "Phantasmagoria" {Hiro}

[typings]

Title: Phantasmagoria
Author: kenzimone
Disclaimer: Don't own.
Fandom: Heroes
Character: Hiro
Rating: R
Word count: 2,200
Summary: To know to change the past, one must have lived through the future.
Note: In episode 109 - Homecoming, Mohinder has prophetic dreams brought on by a young boy. In writing this fic, I choose to assume that Mohinder himself

Comments

[ultimate_cin]

This was a great look at how future!Hiro came to visit Peter in the present. I think you got the characterization and everything downpat. My only nitpick is that there were some minor typos/spelling mistakes, but other than those, it's a great story. :)

[robin_redbreast]

This is really neat. I love the characterizations and the setting.

[kultiras]

I love this so, so much. I like the way you showed them entering each other's lives, and the way you explained things (Save the cheerleader, the scar, what could happen after Nov. 8th, etc.)

Anyway, I just wanted to say I loved it! =)

[kultiras]

Oh, and good word choice for the title!

[the_dala]

This is a plausible vision of the future, and a great look at the characters. Well done!

[sheepfairy]

Ooh, that was lovely. I really liked the descriptive aspects of it, especially when you where describing Mohinder's lack of sight.

And, oh, the ending! So great.