Comments | typings: [Heroes] - "Post-Mortem" {Claire; Mohinder}

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[Heroes] - "Post-Mortem" {Claire; Mohinder}

Nov 23, 2006 13:24

Title: Post-Mortem
Author: kenzimone
Disclaimer: Don't own.
Fandom: Heroes
Characters: Claire, Mohinder
Rating: R
Word count: 3,000
Summary: Claire Bennet does not know what she had expected death to be like, but it certainly wasn't this.
Note: This was written as an alternative continuation of 103 - One Giant Leap way back in October. Thanks to eekz for the ( Read more... )

genre: au, genre: gen, fandom: heroes, genre: fic, rating: r

Comments 11

vampedvixen November 23 2006, 16:36:18 UTC

That was wonderful. One of the best Heroes fanfics I've read thus far.

lostdreamer56 November 23 2006, 17:07:06 UTC

Wonderfully written. I adore Claire, and I'm so glad there is someone out there willing to write her with someone other than Peter or Zach.

meli_64 November 23 2006, 18:32:10 UTC

That was awesome! :D I loved it. If only that could have happened. Like Mohinder giving Claire a cab ride too.

evillittletwit November 23 2006, 19:51:37 UTC

Oh, this is just -- this is just perfect. Wow.

There aren't enough stories with Mohinder in them, and certainly not enough stories with him in them that are well-written. This is just wonderful.

I love how you used Claire's POV here. When you're running, you truly don't think. I love "In the mirror his eyes crinkle, and she can hear the smile in his voice". I love all the words here -- you bring a gritty, real, good feeling to this.

I'd love to see this continued, if you ever feel the inspiration. If/when they do meet, I definitely want it to be like this.

terebi_me November 25 2006, 02:11:48 UTC

excellent.