[Heroes] - "Into Nirvana" {Mohinder}

May 13, 2007 02:52

Title: Into Nirvana
Author: kenzimone
Disclaimer: Don't own.
Fandom: Heroes
Character: Mohinder
Rating: R
Word count: 1,300
Summary: For the first time in years, Mohinder Suresh feels something akin to hope stir in the recesses of his soul.
Note: Well, it seemed like a good idea at three in the morning. A Five Years Gone coda. Missing scenes, if you so will ( Read more... )

genre: gen, fandom: heroes, genre: fic, rating: r

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angelmoogle May 13 2007, 02:13:28 UTC
Wow, that was amazing.

You really captured Mohinder and I especially love this image: The black string still stretches like a poisonous snake across the floor, like oil on the surface of clear water. Sylar. Still there, still tangled up into everything.

Even five years passed, he's still the cause of everything gone wrong.

Beautiful ^_^

P.S. Please write more Mohinder fics...there really isn't enough!

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butterflyweb May 13 2007, 03:45:58 UTC
That was so lovely.

I adored (and envy) how you wove the Hinduism of Mohinder's childhood with his present, and your diction and imagery was simply superb.

Beautifully done, and yay for mohinder!fic!

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biases May 13 2007, 05:11:32 UTC
How wonderful to read a Mohinder-centric piece, one that shows careful consideration in writing his character and doesn't just slash him at the first available opportunity. Excellent writing with a firm grasp of plot and flow, this was a very enjoyable read.

Going into the mems!

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downbythebay_4 May 13 2007, 21:15:19 UTC
Very emotional, well done. I really enjoyed the voice you used.

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tju_tju_tju_tju May 14 2007, 21:55:30 UTC
...Wow. How very, very amazing this is. So beautifully rendered. Outstanding.

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