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[vintage_belle]

Title: The Still of the Night

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[vintage_belle]

Because it's Nino? XD

Thank you. :)

[yay_box]

I am usually completely unable to recognize people posting anonymously, but when I read this on je_fqfest, the first thing I thought was "This has to be vintage_belle". And now you're reposting it and my admiration for you has just about reached the sky.

This is perfect. The atmosphere, the details, the pace, everything. The interactions between Ohno and Nino are fantastic. And the sex scene is... is it weird if I say beautiful? It fits so perfectly with the circumstances of their meeting and how they've acted around each other. There again, the details and small things make it incredibly realistic without breaking the slow and languid quality to it (Nino feeling exposed when Satoshi lies down, or when his legs start to tremble.)

I've read this several times already, but it never stops being incredible. Thank you so much for sharing it.

[vintage_belle]

I think you must be the first person to have guessed me from an anonymous challenge - I thought perhaps I just don't have a distinct enough writing style. I'm incredibly pleased and touched that you were able to recognize me.

Thank you so much. :) I really wanted to make a harem world that was a believable combination of old Japan and Arabia - that was the point that worried me most about writing this. Especially because mixing Japan and Arabic culture isn't something I've ever tried before. Then on top of that, making Ohno and Nino believable in their roles so people reading didn't come after my head with pitchforks. XD

Thank you again!

[jamasunda]

I was way too excited reading this xD
I came across it last night before I went to bed and I was all" 8D" through it

Ohno's got the power 8D And Nino.... <3 >83 a virgin~ *hugs*

I love well written AU's, and yours is just EXCELLENT ♥♥♥♥♥

(the sex~♥ *fans self*)

I need to take commenting 101 T_T

[vintage_belle]

Thank you. ♥

[carey_chan]

that was really really interesting! *____*
I don´t really know what to write else but..that was awesome!

[vintage_belle]

Thank you. ♥

[carey_chan]

will there be more ? *___*

[vintage_belle]

Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaybe. XD

[a_mbry0]

omg what an interesting idea!!
Nino, virgin slave.. heheheh that suits him perfectly! XDD
♥♥♥

[vintage_belle]

Thank you!♥