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[tymmi]

Comments

[darkwaterfrey]

wow! How come you have to redraw the whole thing? What's wrong with it now?

[tymmi]

Aside from nitpicks like missing the extra chair in the panels on this page (fixed now) there are some structural issues with thge sequence as whole that I'm not happy with. I also feel that the artwork doesn't all "gel" as well as I'd like.

I figure, for a vanity project anyway, I might as well be as satisfied as I can with the final product.