wrote this today,i'm still trying to figure out what it means though

[tylafeet]

These clouds are full of rain
Let's watch it fall through a broken window pane
In a broken house,with untouched dreams
Let's listen closely,as misery screams

In the demolished house,the hearts began to collapse,everything pushed aside,out of our grasp
Let's listen closely,as misery screams

tyler-

Comments

[tylafeet]

pshh you suck

where were u last night?

[tinkerbell_44]

I didn't know you wrote peotry!! thats pretty sweet!!:) I like it..

[tylafeet]

ha i don't really...

[hanna_shama]

thats pretty awesome.....i love it! good job

[tylafeet]

thanks dude

[jroe]

wow thats good tyler! im proud! :)