fic: Coupling (Aarón Ñíguez/Bojan Krkić, NC-17)

May 27, 2009 19:33

Title: Coupling
Author: txorakeriak
Fandom: Football, Spanish U-17 2006
Pairing: Aarón Ñíguez/Bojan Krkić
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I'm a lying bastard and made this all up. I don't claim to know any of the players I write about, they're most definitely not mine, and this very probably didn't happen. No payment involved, no offence intended. This is for my ( Read more... )

.football, player: bojan, #fanfiction, player: ñíguez

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dfotw May 27 2009, 18:09:04 UTC
Oh Dear Lord! Is this what you do when they ask you for a drabble?

What a fantastic fic! The slow, hesitant pace of the beginning which gives way to the sudden, scorching ending... wow!

And I don't really know Ñíguez, but I'm going to have to google him...

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txorakeriak May 28 2009, 17:56:07 UTC
Er, not always! *LOL* Most of the time my brain is just blank and I sit in front of an empty page for hours. I'm not really made to do spontaneous writing, but at the moment it seems to be working out! (I wrote your Thierry/Bojan today, by the way, it's now waiting to be betaed. :D)

Thank you so much for the kind feedback! I particularly appreciate that you told me what exactly you liked about this, it's so helpful! :)

And you definitely have to google Aarón, he's adorable! :D

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dfotw May 28 2009, 18:27:07 UTC
Aaaah, yes, staring at an empty page... such a wonderful pastime! But my, when I saw this 3000-word "drabble", I went into panic-mode... now I'm embarrassed to post my measly drabbles!

I'm dreadful at writing on command... but I can't say no, so I find myself doing it more often than I would like! (and you've written my Thierry/Bojan already? *glomps*)

It's a pleasure to give feedback to someone who appreciates it.

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txorakeriak May 28 2009, 18:30:38 UTC
As I told someone else, my brain doesn't seem to understand the concept of "drabbling". Your Thierry/Bojan is about 1,500 words long. *facepalm* But I'm not complaining, I'm thrilled I'm writing again. I really missed it. :)

And hee, I'm sure your drabbles will be awesome and not measly or dreadful at all! :D

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txorakeriak May 28 2009, 17:57:14 UTC
Thank you so much for the detailed feedback! I'm so glad you enjoyed this, and very flattered by your kind compliments! ♥

LOL! Stretching exercises feature in fic FAR too rarely, so I couldn't help including them here! Glad it worked out for you! :D

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txorakeriak May 28 2009, 18:17:14 UTC
I'm so sorry you had such a crappy day at work! :( To be honest, when I read that first line of your comment, I was getting all nervous, hoping I hadn't ruined your day entirely with this fic, so I was all the more relieved when I found out you liked it! :)

I don't really know anything about Aarón, so I'm glad you think I've written him well. *exhale of relief* XD

Thanks especially for telling me what exactly you liked in this story, it's so helpful and muchly appreciated! <3!!!

(And I think you deserve getting spoiled! :D)

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txorakeriak May 28 2009, 18:47:14 UTC
I'm immensely relieved, I swear! :)

And I agree, Aarón is adorable! :D

(O HAI, MR SPOCK! XD)

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txorakeriak May 28 2009, 18:19:46 UTC
Thank you so much for reading this even though you don't know Aarón, it means a lot to me! And thanks also for the kind, detailed comment! (Haha, yes, they're both jailbait in this, but I can't help loving the thought of naughty boys. XD)

I'm so glad you liked this!

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lhuneldaiel May 28 2009, 15:31:19 UTC
OMFG... Are you the same person that said their Muse had left them?

Deeee-licious. I was eating a popsicle while reading, and at one point I sucked the flavour right out of it. NNNGGGH.

I don't think I've ever read a more sexy stretching scene than this one. (and you know I don't fancy Bojan. Aarón, I find cute though *blames secondratestar*)

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txorakeriak May 28 2009, 18:21:45 UTC
Er... well... yes?

I really can't explain why I've written three fics in the last three days because I don't understand how this is even possible. I'm not used to being inspired, this is all very new to me. ;)

But thank you so so much for your feedback! It means a lot to me that you read this despite not really interested in Bojan, and I'm thrilled that you liked it so much. You know how much I appreciate your opinion, right? *squishes you* <3!

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lhuneldaiel May 28 2009, 18:58:06 UTC
How funny!

Three fics? O_O

I love your writing, you know that! You're one of the few authors I trust enough to read.
The way Aarón seduces him, and Bojan allows himself to be seduced... NNNGGHHH

*smooooooooooch*

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txorakeriak May 28 2009, 20:08:57 UTC
Yes! O_O They got shorter every day, but at least they're finished! I just posted a Finnan/Agger, and today I wrote a Thierry/Bojan that's currently at the beta's. By the way, if you want me to write something for you, there are still a couple of drabbles (or make that ficlets) left here. And I need a bit of diversity. ;)

*blushes madly* I'm still all over the moon, really. You know how much I appreciate your writing, so it's particularly flattering for me to hear that you enjoy mine. <3!

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