fanfic: Chances

Apr 03, 2006 20:23

Title: Chances
Author: txorakeriak
Fandom: Pirates of the Caribbean
Disclaimer: I still don't own them. This piece is a work of fiction. Don't sue me or I'll cry.
Pairing: pre-Sparrington
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2,725
Summary: As we all know, Jack Sparrow escaped his hanging at the end of Pirates of the Caribbean: The Curse of the Black Pearl. What if the ( Read more... )

moving pics: pirates of the caribbean, #fanfiction, potc: sparrington

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jedipirate April 3 2006, 19:55:02 UTC
*applauds*

Lovely! As usual. ^_^

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txorakeriak April 3 2006, 20:21:01 UTC
Thank you, dear! :) Glad you liked! And glad that I still haven't written anything you didn't like. :D

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anoriell April 3 2006, 19:55:57 UTC
Brilliant!

I loved this piece! Incredible dialogue. You sure set us up for an enjoyable ride along with these two... hope there'll be more.

Well done.

Great use of the quote.

Hugs,

Anoriell

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txorakeriak April 3 2006, 20:22:53 UTC
Wow! That review so totally made me squee! Thank you so much for your kind words! *hugs* I'm honoured! And I must say that hippediva helped me a lot with Jack's dialogue. She has Jack Sparrow living in her head - she's a genius. :) So whatever sounded great was probably her idea. :)

Next time, there will be Norrington paired with someone else - but paired this time. :) I'm still working on it. Thanks for reading, I'm immensely grateful!

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hippediva April 3 2006, 21:35:34 UTC
I love this so much! And don't be silly...I only helped you tweak a few things. It's marvellous and so understated! Brava, luv! And thank you for such a lovely story!

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txorakeriak April 3 2006, 21:39:58 UTC
I'm so very very glad you liked this! You might know now that I'm always very insecure about my fics until they're betaed and improved. :) And you did an amazing job. All the great Jack lines were yours and I won't forget that. Still giggling at the albatross comparison, by the way. That was ingenious! :D

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cherusha April 3 2006, 22:30:15 UTC
I am a sucker for "How it all began" type fics, and this is just lovely. One thing I love about the Sparrow/Norrington ship is that they match (or rather complement) each other intellectually. Hooray, dialogue! :)

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txorakeriak April 4 2006, 16:32:25 UTC
Thank you very much! :) The quote just cried for Jack and the Isla de Muerta business and I'm glad you liked how I dealt with it! Jack and Norrington are equals, and no matter what happens, they'll never lose their snark, and that's what I love about them.

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sandssavvy April 4 2006, 00:59:17 UTC
Yay sparrington!
I really liked this, and I thought the ending was great.
Though I would have taken Jack up on that. ;)

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txorakeriak April 4 2006, 16:33:34 UTC
Thank you! I wasn't too sure about that rather fairy tale ending, but I'm relieved that you liked it! :)

Though I would have taken Jack up on that. ;)
Remember, the Commodore is no fool... :D

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