Comments | txilar: naruto fic: The Colour of Virtue, part three

txilar

naruto fic: The Colour of Virtue, part three

Jan 30, 2009 20:56

The Colour of Virtue | Adult | ~12000 completed ( Read more... )

fic: naruto, naruto fic: iruka & kakashi

Comments 27

lilian_cho January 31 2009, 03:47:22 UTC

Meep. Glad the drug works for you!

Haha Victorian porn... *tries to picture it*

txilar February 2 2009, 19:06:29 UTC

Those Victorians were so dirty! Some of them are just plain hysterical, but others. Oh my! Pretty hot! ^_~

shi_chan06 January 31 2009, 05:56:57 UTC

Iruka ... is jealous. Oh how I DIE~ &hearts &hearts

Farm girl? Then I must insist that Iruka is a pepper-farmer! Or ... raddishes XD

txilar February 2 2009, 19:07:24 UTC

AHahaha, yes, he farms dirty minded tragic vegetables!

Ehem. Yeah, he's a little jealous, but boy is he in denial about it! ^_^

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txilar February 2 2009, 19:08:47 UTC

Yeah, I don't think Kakashi is taking this mission seriously at all! =O

I hoped jealous!Iruka would be endearing. ^_^ Thank you.

Ah, another migraineur, eh? I hate that meds sometimes work and sometimes don't so you can't ever really depend on them. >_<

sinjah January 31 2009, 07:48:16 UTC

Ugh, I'm sorry about your migraine! I know exactly how you feel, I get headaches and migraines all the time too!

Weeee, this chapter was awesome! Hints, hints, I can't wait to find out more!

So, let me get this straight. Kakashi really is one of Yumiko's regulars? Or is he posing as one? This part has me a little confused, as there's evidence to both XD

txilar February 2 2009, 19:12:38 UTC

All the time! They're maddening aren't they?? It's mostly gone now, but I can feel it lurking around the corners hoping to catch me unaware.

I'm so glad you like this chapter. I think it's my favourite overall.

As for Kakashi and Yumiko... I really shouldn't say. >_> It could be embarassing. But it sure seems like they know each other pretty good, right?

sinjah February 3 2009, 20:40:00 UTC

Yes! Yes, they are! Ooh, and I completely hate the lurking-around-the-corners feeling!

I think this was my favourite too! (Man, typing 'favourite' feels so good. The internet has Americanized me way too much XD) The cuteness! It keels me! And the plot hints! ::goes to reread::

Ooooh, so it's a mystery! I thought that maybe I just hadn't gotten it. Hmmm, now I do have a couple of ideas (though they may be far fetched). It does seem like they know each other >D Eee, now I'm wondering and guessing and can't wait to read more ^____^

senna_chan January 31 2009, 08:22:53 UTC

The swing-scene made me chuckle and raise some eyebrows to Kakashi. I mean, swinging Iruka? ... Why does that sound so dirty?

Anyway, the plot is thickening like a soup; who is this Kenta-sama? Why Kakashi calls Iruka Mi-chan (I'm also considering that he and Yumiko know each other more than well)? And when the heck they said that they'll be keeping a close eye on Iruka this evening?

Lot of questions to ponder while waiting for that important scene in next chapter. XD

- Senna-chan

senna_chan January 31 2009, 08:24:20 UTC

Oh, and I feel sorry for those head-aches! Hopefully you'll feel better soon! ^_^

txilar February 2 2009, 19:15:39 UTC

Aw, thanks for adding the note about feeling better. I went to bed early Friday night and woke up pretty darn good. (I woke up before 9 on the weekend; that's like unreal!)

ANd yes! Iruka did seem dirty up there didn't he, but it was all so... innocent. >_> Or something like that.

Kakashi can't seem to make up his mind what to call Iruka does he? ^_^

Oh and Haru told Iruka that they'd be watching, but I didn't show that scene. Iruka just has a little flashback of Haru saying it. And he's kind of like 'oh yay, I mean oh crap!' ^_^

(THat important scene is killing me for some reason, augh, I don't know what it is...)