fic: You Taste Like Betrayal

[txilar]

You Taste Like Betrayal | txilar | 510 | R | Fenrir/Sirius
Author’s Notes: For lilian_cho, finally. Follows Hungry

and I pace around hungry, sniffing the twilight,
hunting for you, for your hot heart
-Neruda

Comments

[bloodrebel333]

Sirius/Fenrir is something I've been wanting to read for ages now, but this is the first time I've seen it around. Sirius versus Fenrir. And then the name Remus Lupin, and Sirius is at Fenrir's throat. It has such dynamic.

Fenrir leaned close, sniffing Sirius, lips resting on his ear, tongue creeping out as he spoke, hot, wet, mouth curving as Sirius tried to contain a shiver and failed, shaking more. “I made him,” he whispered, licking Sirius’s neck.

:)

[txilar]

^_^ Thank you! I like that you noticed it was Remus that drove Sirius, but Regulus that Fenrir brought up. All very twisted.

I wrote this months ago, but was hung on the last 50 or so words. Bit of a writing block this year, but it's getting better as the stress recedes. This past weekend I wrapped up a lot of things that had been left hanging in the 'island of misfit fic' folder. I'm most pleased!

[archon_mentha]

Chilling and wonderful, a horrible nightmare even in Azkaban.

[txilar]

Thank you! 'Chilling' is a good compliment. I was going for just that. And yes, in those surroundings, even! ^_^

[etrangere]

Fascinating, chilling, beautiful.

[txilar]

My favourite words ^_^ Thank you!

[red_squared]

*shudders*

Creepily good :) The fandom could do with more of this pairing!

[txilar]

Eeeeeh a shudder, perfect! I like being creepy. I really do. Thank you!

[amanuensis1]

Oh, there is some tasty stuff here.

“I thought all the flesh from your tree was gone.” <==Fenrir saying flesh, not blood or line or people but "flesh." Yeah. Lovely little touches like that.

[txilar]

I think Fenrir would love that--tasty, indeed. ^_^

Thank you so much!