Broken Hearts Break Faster Every Day (Donna/CJ)

[alaira]

Um, is it still the 28th somewhere on the planet? No? Shucks. One day late, but 1000+ words, so I wouldn't say it's short...

Title: Broken Hearts Break Faster Every Day
Author: alaira
Rating: PG13
Disclaimer: the West Wing belongs to Sorkin, Wells, et al. Titles and summary belong to Paper Moon. I only borrow, and promise to put back neatly when

Comments

[fluffybkitty]

Very nice, but kinda sad. The nice kind of sad of the sad kind of nice.

Either way I like it.

[alaira]

Well, um, thank you. The nicesad/sadnice is what I strive for. :)

[anita_coffee]

I love it! Sad and beautiful. Thankyou ever so much.

*heads to your fic archive to read some more*

[alaira]

You're welcome. Glad you liked!

*keeps forgetting she means to seriously update the archive* It's small. Hopefully you found something else you liked there...

[littleloonlost]

Oh, I love this. It's the kind of scenario that's sometimes done in an appealing way but rarely convincingly, and this is both. Love the dancing (which I always find harder to describe than I expect) and the waking up together, and the ending is perfect.

[alaira]

Wow. Really? Cool. The dancing was the hardest thing to write, so I'm glad it worked out okay. *phew* Thanks much!

[meeshy]

Only just getting caught up with my list of things to read... lovely but sad.. but lovely just the same. I love this pairing....!