TWO HOURS UNTIL MIDNIGHT

Dec 31, 2009 16:47

FESTIVE TITLE: TWO HOURS UNTIL MIDNIGHT
RECIPIENT WHO HAD BETTER BE GRATEFUL BECAUSE I SPENT TIME THAT I COULD HAVE BEEN DRINKING WRITING THIS SHIT: the handsome and dashing (and very patient) invisible_lift
WRITTEN BY: As if you kids didn't know cuz I was so late and yacked all over twitter about that fact: paragraphsSUMMARY: Adventure! Danger! Calennig! Aliens! Ferris ( Read more... )

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kel_reiley December 31 2009, 23:14:30 UTC
action! excitement!
Jack felt it too, an intense sadness, and regret that whoever these intruders were, these accidental visitors forced through the Rift, had found this world so dangerous, so deadly. - and, aw yeah, that - i wanted more of that from torchwood, more of these kinds of alien visitors, accidentally lost via the rift

and the ending ♥

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paragraphs January 3 2010, 03:24:35 UTC
Thank you Kel darling! And I agree--when I thought about it, I realized they really didn't have that many pure-alien-creature episodes. I guess they didn't want to sink into a boring pattern, but dammit, there weren't enough. Pout.

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beesandbrews December 31 2009, 23:54:58 UTC
Jack forgot his wallet? It's a setup, I tell you. A set up! LOL!

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paragraphs January 3 2010, 03:25:04 UTC
Mmmm LOL he might've done just that. LOL!! Thanks for reading and commenting!

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nancybrown January 1 2010, 00:08:01 UTC
I love this kind of alien menace. :D

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paragraphs January 3 2010, 03:28:07 UTC
Whee! Makes me happy that peoples are liking my alien. I could see him so clearly in my mind--I hope I conveyed what I could see. So sad, so beautiful, so lost.

The two aliens have a story, in my mind anyway. Tragic one, with an ending the second one really didn't want to see happen, but unfortunately, it did. It was inevitable, really.

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electro_club January 1 2010, 00:32:23 UTC
Oh, the action! That was awesome, anon! Rly awesome. And rly sweet! Here, hearts! <3333333

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paragraphs January 3 2010, 03:29:11 UTC
Thank you electro-the-wunderkid! Am glad the action worked for you--I am new to writing that sort of thing, so enjoyed stretching those muscles.

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blue_fjords January 1 2010, 13:30:25 UTC
Silly Jack, leaving w/out his wallet!

Awesome action and adventure, yo! And angst and awe. Look at all those A's. I really liked the alien species you created, too, funky and sympathetic. Plus I have a soft spot for "Jack worries about Ianto" stories. :)

And a big hee to Owen & Gwen's plotline. Gwen gets injured, not from an alien, but protecting Owen from his own reputation. Bwah!

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paragraphs January 3 2010, 03:30:53 UTC
Jack is tricky. I like the suggestion by bees that he did it on purpose--the NYE celebration was going on after all. He'll pay Ianto back. LOL. (I guess that's where the porn scene is hiding, oh well--ran out of time)

Thanks baby! Yeah I like it when Gwen smacks Owen down for some reason. :)

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