029 - Bad Girls

[calendar_woman]

Bad Girls

Synopsis: The arrival of Buffy's new Watcher causes somewhat of a domino effect when Faith rebels and brings Buffy along for the ride. Not only that, but there's a new demon around with a penchant for jewelry -- namely a magical amulet -- and a tip about a mysterious, ominous figure somewhere in Sunnydale. Meanwhile, Jenny struggles to

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[always_a_boom]

AHHHHH WESLEY. LOL.
I can't pretend I don't like Wesley (from when he was on 'Angel' moreso than 'Buffy'), but you've totally got his early-appearance grr-so-annoying stuff down :D And I LOVED how Jenny dealt with him. Very...Jenny-ish. I lol'ed at 'windshield wipers' :D

Intriguing stuff with Angel, again, and Giles and Jenny's little conversation about it was very sweet. I love how their relationship has only gotten stronger and stronger through all the Angel stuff, and Giles was direct enough to ask her outright if Angel loved her - I love how open and honest they can be now. Basically, they're brilliant. And you're brilliant for writing them so brilliantly. :D

[calendar_woman]

So glad you liked this!

I have to admit, I loved Wesley, save for his first episode on Buffy, but it was totally fun playing up his annoying side in this one. And I always had an inkling that he would've absolutely hit on Jenny had she been around. And Jenny would've been so nonplussed by it all, haha!

Thanks again!!

[disney_addict]

Okay, so it's my weekly fanfiction reading, and you have no idea how much of a treat it was to find this little gem waiting for me

[calendar_woman]

Yay! I hope you're making it through your fanfiction fast :)

I'm really glad you liked this one. Though I may not be using him much, I definitely had fun introducing Wesley. His rapport with Giles was always so amusing, so I had fun tossing Jenny into the mix as well.

(I can't imagine Giles saying that line with Jenny there, either -- she gets him so flustered and tongue-tied, he can never be terribly quippy around her, lol, which is cute.)

I'm a sucker for fairy tales too, so I've been really looking forward to this newest addition. Hope you like how it turns out! :)

[queensmoot]

Hehe, I knew you'd have Wesley hit on Jenny! That was so funny, I love how annoyed she got - I really despised him when he was in Buffy. I'm still giggling at 'windshield wipers'.

I'm starting to feel sorry for Giles, what with Jenny's super strength. He was constantly getting injured in this chapter, poor guy :P. I love that he's being honest with Jenny about his concerns over Angel: secrets have caused so much trouble between them in the past, it's really nice to see him tell her when something's bothering him.

Haven't read any of the new chapter yet, but I thought I'd mention how excited I am about it! Fairytale stuff is always awesome, I can't wait to see what's going to happen :D.

[calendar_woman]

LOL! I had to have Wesley hit on Jenny, the potential for awesomeness was too great. Besides, I'd always figured that's exactly how things would've gone down if she were still around in season three :D

I'm glad you enjoyed this one, and that you're enjoying what I've got for the new one! Been planning that one for a long time, so I'm hoping it works out! *fingers crossed*

[repowoman24]

I can't believe I haven't posted feedback for this one yet.. Sorry.

Anyway, I remember JUST as you were starting the chapter, I couldn't wait to review it because you started it out by having Rupert being thrown across the room by Super!Jenny. XD Poor dude. I love how he plays it down though, trying not to make her feel bad.

I also LOVED (Just as all these people in here have) how you introduced Wesley. XD I always imagined that he would hit on Jenny. However, Wesley is not 'cool' like Rupert, and therefore does not know how to hit on women properly. Instead, he uses 'windshield wipers.' (I loved that bit SOOO much, btw, XD)

I think, just for payback for some of the things he said about Jenny, Rupert and Jenny could embarass /him/ in someway. I was thinking about that too, but, *shrugs*.

[calendar_woman]

Heee! Glad you liked the Super!Jenny vs. Giles bit :D

Thanks so much for the comments about Wesley! It was difficult to bring him into it just because of how unfamiliar I am with his character. He was only on Buffy for a small portion of that third season, and I'm still only on the early part of Angel season one, so I've barely seen any of him in that. I always figured, though, being a more-lame, younger version of Giles, that he would definitely hit on Jenny, hehe! (And the 'windshield wipers' bit was a total shout-out to one of my first-ever fandoms.)

[calendar_woman]

Thank you so much for the review! I'm so glad you're still enjoying this! :)

Glad you enjoyed Wesley :D He's a little difficult to write since I'm not super familiar with him.

Thank you again!