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016 - All I Want For Christmas

Jun 26, 2009 01:52

All I Want For Christmas

Synopsis: Christmas has come to Sunnydale, in the form of a Sno-Ball dance at the high school and a very festive Jenny Calendar. And all the while, our twosome edge steadily closer to a serious commitment in more ways than one.

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rating: r, season: 2, !original, 016 - all i want for christmas

Comments 6

twiggilala June 26 2009, 22:41:53 UTC

I loved this one! You two are marvelous story-tellers. Poor Jenny and Giles keep getting so close only to be ripped apart again. I can't wait to see what happens next. I'll write more coherently in a bit. But WOW. Go y'all.

calendar_woman July 1 2009, 01:55:32 UTC

Thank you! We're so enjoying writing this, and what makes it even more fun for us is the fact that you're enjoying it right along with us. And yes, we definitely like teasing the Jenny/Giles lovin' but don't worry - the follow-through is coming soon! :)

twiggilala July 1 2009, 02:05:16 UTC

I'm thrilled you are enjoying writing this. I'd be sad if you guys gave up. I enjoy reading a well-written roleplay-fic-mesh-of-awesome.

sheshyre_cat June 27 2009, 07:32:19 UTC

*hihihi* BRILLIANT! I had so much fun reading it...as always...although you were pretty mean, getting them all riled up (and me by the way)and then came that bucket. I just loved it and can't wait to red the next one. Keep going like that, you're awesome. :)

calendar_woman July 1 2009, 01:52:59 UTC

Thanks so much! We're glad you're still enjoying it! This one was one of my favorites to write, and yes - we're meanies, lol! But don't worry, we'll make it up to you soon :D

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calendar_woman December 6 2011, 04:08:33 UTC

Gah! I almost had forgotten about this chapter! If I remember correctly, I think this one took us awhile to get through, but it was so much fun.

Giles was fantastic in this chapter, wasn't he? For that I credit my former writing co-hort; she was the original Giles voice (until "Exit Stage Left" -- aptly-named, as that was her exit from the G/J ship).

And I actually never put much thought into these beginnings, with the Jenny/Willow relationship. At this point in the story, I don't think I had considered taking it to the lengths that I ended up taking it. But it would be interesting to go back and look at how they began. As awesome as evil-Willow was, I did miss when she was all innocent and naive.

And hahaha, we got dangerously close to just saying "Ah screw it" and letting them have sex in the janitor's closet. We desperately wanted their first time to be in "Passion," though, when the story begins to deviate from canon. :)

Thanks for still reviewing all these! I love getting reviews on these old chapters!