aaaaaaaahh omg all my feels into this fic. the characterization is so very spot on. top's insecurity was perfectly him. and daesung was great too, particularly at "For one horrible, gut-churning moment, Daesung looked like he was going to cry. Then it was over, and his expression was unreadable again, calm and collected." because he's such a guarded person irl. and the other members omg. haha fucking spying on and gossiping on top and dae. of course they would, top, of course they would. anyway, just omg I loved this fic, absolutely loved it. you're my todae savior. keepin the pairing alive. ;~~;
I'm so glad you liked it, thank you. :) Hearing that the characterization worked is my favorite feedback. ♥ I definitely think Daesung is super guarded, too, despite how demonstrative his behavior can be, so I'm glad that came across.
I can never understand why there isn't more fic around for this pairing! But I'm glad a few of us still know what's what. :) Thanks again, I'm really glad you enjoyed!
Awww, well the beauty is you can easily write ANOTHER ToDae fic sometime ;) I'm glad to be converting people to the ship!
Thanks so much :) I am off to grad school, but hopefully that doesn't mean I'll be disappearing entirely. We'll have to see how much time I end up having, but I don't intend to drop off the face of the earth. I definitely will!
Gorgeous and sweet, and I love future everyone but Seungri kinda made it. I loved their Tabi gossip circle!! His interaction with the girls before the concert was awesome because it reminded me of when he had silver hair and a little girl called him ajhussi and I melted. This made my morning. ♥___♥
YAY thank you for reading darling ♥ Haha I was telling RC that writing Seungri is ridiculously easy for me, which is funny because he kind of pisses me off? But writing brats, IDK, it just comes naturally. *g* I'm so glad you enjoyed, thank you for the comment! :x
Comments 40
Reply
I can never understand why there isn't more fic around for this pairing! But I'm glad a few of us still know what's what. :) Thanks again, I'm really glad you enjoyed!
Reply
(The comment has been removed)
Reply
the characterizations are perfect and... muh. <3
I can learn so much from writers like you~
Reply
Reply
(The comment has been removed)
Thanks so much :) I am off to grad school, but hopefully that doesn't mean I'll be disappearing entirely. We'll have to see how much time I end up having, but I don't intend to drop off the face of the earth. I definitely will!
Reply
Reply
Reply
Leave a comment