Fic (PoT) - Standing Still

[twobees]

Title: Standing Still
Rating: G
Pairing: Fuji/Taka
Word Count: 1537
Summary: After Taka stops playing tennis, he starts hating sushi.
Notes: I wrote this in 2007, periodically opened it up from time to time to try and make it longer, and then gave up and forgot about it. Just found it again and decided it was good enough as is.

Comments

[onlysayitonce]

My favourite pairing ever, what an amazing way to start the day. Seeing this at the top of my flist made me ridiculously happy, and reading it even more so. I really love the way you write both of them, quietly sweet. :D I'm so pleased, thank you for posting!

[longleggedgit]

This comment made me ridiculously happy! Thank you, sweetheart. ♥ I'm glad this thing saw the light of day at last!

[prillalar]

This is really sweet! I'm glad Kawamura is getting some well-deserved attention. :)

[longleggedgit]

Thank you! :) He deserves more, poor boy. I've been really wanting to rewatch lately so maybe if I get around to it I'll write him some more. ♥

[todaythesamesky]

Ahhh, this was so good. *____*

[longleggedgit]

Pffft you're too sweet! :)

[ms_worplesdon]

Oh! So achy and gorgeous. Poor Taka. I've always hated that he quit. You really capture the weird and subtle way in which Fuji seems to pay attention to Taka. I loved it. ♥

[longleggedgit]

Awww thank you precious! Me too, it breaks my heart. He's just very . . . self-sacrificing, the dear thing.

Glad you enjoyed, yeee! ♥

[danbi]

Very sweet. I liked this part a lot:

"I used to take my little brother," Fuji says. "Before he got too embarrassed to hold hands."

Taka nods. It occurs to him that he should maybe be embarrassed to hold hands with Fuji too, but he isn't really. He's more embarrassed at the idea of falling and pulling Fuji down with him.

Hee. ♥

[longleggedgit]

Awww, thank you so much honey! ♥