Fic (Oofuri) - One Step Back

Jun 08, 2010 11:37

Title: One Step Back
Rating: PG
Pairing: Abe/Mihashi
Word Count: 1352
Summary: Abe is pissed, and he's not sure why, but somehow it's Mihashi's fault.
Notes: Written on a whim after marathoning the entire series again because season two is so magical. ♥ No real defined point of time in the series, so you could set it anywhere it works in your ( Read more... )

oofuri, abe/mihashi, rated pg

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mousapelli June 8 2010, 03:20:54 UTC
yesssssssssssss

I've rewatched this whole thing and I need fic SO MUCH. I don't want you to have the mumps and stuff, but if it gets me Abe/Mihashi...lol i think we might have to sacrifice you, for the good of the team.

anyway, these two! ♥ I love how Abe gets so frustrated by him and just starts yelling and everybody else on the team is like "sigh, haven't you figured out you're supposed to be doing it yet?"

Not like Hanai and Tajima. I think they worked that shit out right away, lol.

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longleggedgit June 8 2010, 03:35:16 UTC
You too! I'm glad I'm not the only one, heee. I'm trying to finish the manga, too! I've been plowing through but holy shit, Oofuri has long chapters! Not that I'm complaining, mind you, I'm just still not even past Tosei!

HAHA well hey, let it not be said that I don't do my best for the team. :D

I know, you can just see everyone else eye-rolling at how clueless Abe is about just what it means that he's obsessed with LITERALLY EVERY LITTLE THING MIHASHI DOES.

Yeah, I'm sure Tajima saw to that. :D Lol.

Thank you!! ♥

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mousapelli June 8 2010, 03:51:45 UTC
I completely adore how at the beginning, Tajima is like YAY!!! about everything, and Hanai is like "....motherfucker, he's the boyfriend, isn't he? It's HIM. Son of a bitch!!" and then there's that one scene where he literally goes all PINK FLOWERS at Tajima. lmfao japan.

Also i enjoy when Abe's mother and Mihashi's mother finally meet and there's totally this moment of "so it's YOUR kid fucking my son" silence while Hanai-san blathers on at them. And then Abe's father, oh my god. that whole thing made me crack up.

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longleggedgit June 8 2010, 04:49:55 UTC
Haha, I knowwwwww. Actually I have a semi-angsty epic sort of fic in my head with Hanai being all in denial about everything but we'll see what ever comes of that. I COULDN'T BELIEVE WHEN THE LIKE HAPPY LOVEY BUBBLES AND HANAI'S BLUSHING HAPPENED THOUGH. I WAS LIKE OH COME ON OOFURI YOU KNOW EXACTLY WHAT YOU ARE DOING.

HAHAHA too true, that's exactly what they were thinking. "I'M SORRY MY SON ALWAYS DOES EXACTLY WHAT HE WANTS," indeed. And yes, omg, Mihashi meeting Papa-Abe and being COMPLETELY TERRIFIED BECAUSE IT'S HIS BIG SCARY IN-LAW NOW ALKDFJALKFE loved it loved it loved it.

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shirono June 8 2010, 03:28:56 UTC
*finally exhales*
Oh my lord, this was so good.

So very good.

Thank you so much for sharing!!!

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longleggedgit June 8 2010, 03:35:54 UTC
Thank you so much! :D I'm glad you enjoyed. ♥__♥

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longleggedgit June 8 2010, 09:36:55 UTC
Thanks so much! I see him as being a rather emotionally stunted boy, so yeah, he has a lot of trouble with working those feelings out. But he'll get there. :)

I'm really glad you liked it! I've been plowing through your stuff and it's great. ♥

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sarasusa June 8 2010, 11:50:10 UTC
Awww! Hide inside his mitt! *loves*

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longleggedgit June 9 2010, 07:54:58 UTC
I think he tries, sometimes. :) Thank you!

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ms_worplesdon June 8 2010, 16:14:29 UTC
Again, I just loved this. EVEN MORE NOW THAT I'VE SEEN 10. How much inspiration came from having seen the raw? Because this was totally IC, more than I'd even realized. EXCELLENT WORK!!!

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longleggedgit June 9 2010, 07:56:15 UTC
Man I love that icon al;dkfje they're such lesbos <3 And YAY thank you, sweetheart. :) I think I started writing this BEFORE I saw 10, actually, but I put the finishing touches on after, so there was definitely some influence there. ♥

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