Naruto: relative humidity

[two_if_by_sea]

No, I do not care if this fic rots in hell. I AM FINALLY DONE WITH IT, GODDAMNIT. Except, oh my god, it's really really bad and I regret ever having started it. But it is DONE. And now I officially believe that NaruSasu is completely IMPOSSIBLE and I will never be able to fic it correctly! (erin I am sure you are GLOATING)

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[lesstraveled]

my brain has finally gotten ungluey enough to process this properly. (actually probably not because i always have the feeling i'm missing a ton of stuff with your fic, or at least the fic by you that i have read.) i am glad. DO NOT DELETE THIS.

i really have nothing coherent to say, but: i do not like naruto/sasuke. you made me believe it and want it for the duration of this story, you made me hurt for sasuke. both of which takes some doing, okay. >O

[two_if_by_sea]

^^;; In all honesty, I probably would not have deleted it. I would have put it under a private lock or something and then pretended it didn't exist. Humdedum.

Um, um, isn't Chouji already dead, though? *weeps* And dude, have I ever told you that I've always wanted to write a fic explaining why Naruto failed two classes but was still in the same class with everyone else? And how I've always wanted Shikamaru and Kiba to sort of fail with him, so like, that's why in flashbacks they're always together?

Konoha = probably a bitchy small town, man. Gossip spreads EVERYWHERE.

Sasuke has sexy feet. Mm.

See, originally this fic was supposed to be really short, so the entire thing would be jarring, not just the ending, which I realized had no transistion. *WEEPS SOME MORE* It is sort of like the shika/temari fic I wrote. I just randomly put in Gaara/Naruto EVERYWHERE now.

<33333 you back so much

[lesstraveled]

i refuse to believe chouji is dead until kishimoto SAYS SO. with neon letters. and a banner and a parade. same goes for neji.

i think we talked about the classes and stuff once, yeah, but didn't know you wanted to write fic. >D i love young!naruto because wah, so cute. if you ignore the drive-by angst. which i do. (i bet shikamaru failed those three times because he slept in and missed the exam. and kiba ... oh boy. kiba. *facepalm*)

sasuke's just sexy in general. until he opens his mouth.

I just randomly put in Gaara/Naruto EVERYWHERE now.

*cracks up so so much*

[gelfling8604]

The set-ups...not that improbable, actually. The bit where Gaara came in was a little, but it worked well enough--it added the sexual aspect that the story needed to clarify the relationships, or else it could've all been blown off as "Really strong friendships" or something like that.

I LOVED the restraint and pain in the NaruSasu relationship here--absolutely loved it. It's...it's perfect. I wish there was more of it, I need more of this.

*stunned and happy*

[two_if_by_sea]

See, I really do like the dynamic of NaruSasu, but it's so hard to work around some of the indomintable barriers in the relationship now that Orochimaru and stuff has, you know, invaded.

I wish there was more NaruSasu around that didn't have to screw with canon or insert random AUs and silliness to happen. *sigh*

<3 Thank you, though!

[tychoelite]

It's the same reason why Haku killed himself, the same reason Tsunaide gambles, the same reason Iruka cares. It's the same reason why Gaara pretends not to notice that Naruto leaving even though they both know that Gaara doesn't sleep. It's the same reason why Naruto stands outside Sasuke's apartment that night waiting for the lights to turn off, shivering. It's the same reason why Sasuke sleeps that night with one hand on the shoulder with the seal, his skin itching in his sleep.

I cant stop reading this. I think it might be the best line(s) of fic I have ever read. Your simply an amazing writer.....

I hope you dont mind if I add you?

[two_if_by_sea]

*blushes* Thanks.

Yeah, feel free too! I'm not sure I write much Naruto fic anymore, though, so you might be disappointed.

[kittea]

It's the same reason why Gaara pretends not to notice that Naruto leaving even though they both know that Gaara doesn't sleep.
Best line ever. ;;

So much ANGST! D:. Now.. I have to go find some happy, fluffy fics to combat it. :x

Your writing style sorta reminds me of this fic (H/D, HP fandom), which is one of my personal favourite feel-good fics. XD. Also dorrie6's style. Well.. Those were the two people I thought of. 8D Both HP.

...-goes to read your other stuff.- Don't be afraid it I have friended you. XD!

[two_if_by_sea]

crimson_stained was actually a sort of far acquaintance of mine, so, ahahaha, I guess it might be the whole HP thing?

Dude, friend away. <3

[absenceofmind]

omg. ok. i have finally seen enough naruto to sorta kinda maybe understand where your gaara-love is coming from (although not enough to understand the references to chouji--he's dead?--and kabuto and shikamaru, quite, unless shadow-boy has managed to SHAME sasuke into staying somehow). but AHHHHH THE SASUNARU and it saddens me, really, to think that you once did believe in them kinda and that sasuke apparently destroyed your faith. *deep sighs

[two_if_by_sea]

Gaara doesn't become OMG FUCKING FANTASTIC until quite a bit past the Chuunin series, so I'm not sure exactly where you are? Chouji is questionably dead, you'll find out why later. Kabuto, AUGH. *dies* KABUTO. Shikamaru is so totally omgwtf-ing AMAZING later on, I'm so shocked he ended up being such a cool character, so. Sasuke. Does something you want to kill him for. I really shoudl put up spoiler warnings on my fics, I'm sorry! It's just I assumed no Naruto fans read me and that the ones who did (erin, bing, etc) were already up to par with the recent additions