UKiss: 0330

Apr 07, 2011 03:08

Title: 0330 the moment I missed you.
Parings: Uh... Soobum, Elvin, ASeop....
Rating: PG 13...  
Notes: This has everyone in it but not all are psychically there... it's kinda sad...
Summery: Everythings wrong... Dongho doesn't understand and he just wants thing to be right again.

This is dedicated to my dear Cinnimonster. ^^

Dongho was walking, in the ( Read more... )

0330, aseop, elvin, u-kiss, soobum

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Spot! two_dents April 7 2011, 08:13:38 UTC
Spot for K_pop4life. ^^

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Re: Spot! k_pop4life April 7 2011, 13:38:55 UTC
First time reading a U-kiss fic I don't know I'm just so engrossed with the SHINee fandom that I haven't really read anything else OTL

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s2_otter April 8 2011, 09:29:19 UTC
This is really good <3
I don't exactly like all the pairings you used, but this story was too addictive for me to just stop and skip it <3
It's so unconventional, you're really good at this ^^

I'm just kinda sad Alexander isn't really there, but all the tension there (esp the Elvin) was just perfect, really.
And although I picked up that Dongho was hallucinating, I thought Kibum was dead, glad he finally did come back :)
And how jealousy makes it look like AJ and Eli has something on, but really, your brain sometimes just exaggerate what you don't want to believe just because humans are always more negative.

However, I'm just going to be honest about this, but I thought Dongho's change at the end was too sudden. Like some realisation that he was actually hallucinating and believing it. I thought humans take a longer time to overcome it, but of course, maybe you didn't want to drag the story too long / do as the MV acted, where Dongho just broke out into a smile :)

This was great, thanks so much for this wonderful read. <3

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two_dents April 19 2011, 02:00:47 UTC
Sorry for like, ignoring your response... XD I've kinda been busy guilt-tripping the friend I wrote it for because she has yet to read it! XDDD ( ... )

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s2_otter April 19 2011, 08:34:23 UTC
Aha.

Thank you for liking my comment, aha. I'm actually a Kemaru shipper /coughs. Nope, you're not the few people out there that dislike Kemaru. Kevin's in every pairing, so basically every other pairing hardcore shippers dislike Kemaru at least a little bit?

<3 /Elvin is my least liked Kevin pairing lol
Don't mention it :) You did write well enough for me to read on ^^

Aww, I guess it's just humans to err XD Don't worry about it :)

Ahaha, eek, you made me think Kibum was dead! XD Baddd gurlll~!

Yeah, indeed, the video did made me roll my eyes a little haha, it's so anticlimax suddenly with no real resolution .__. If one is in denial for really long, you wouldn't just snap out of it...:S

<3 Thanks for sharing ^^

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helnaa April 15 2011, 14:59:03 UTC
hi there! This is my first time reading ukiss fanfic and i totally love it! :D how i wish kibum did come back for real :( and also xander :(

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two_dents April 19 2011, 03:39:22 UTC
Awww.... I agree... but Kibum is doing so well right now and Alexander is so happy... I don't know what to think anymore... XDDDD

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helnaa April 19 2011, 06:31:52 UTC
yeah i agree with you xD but it's no wrong to hope for it right? :PP

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two_dents April 19 2011, 06:58:01 UTC
Indeed. I'm not really a UKiss fan ((don't get me wrong, I love their music, and I would give almost anything if Soohyun would just serenade me forever)) but I really didn't believe that they needed to replace the fallen members, and my friend is always going on about how AJ is okay, but Hoon not so much... ((well not always but whenever the subject arises. XD))

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helnaa April 19 2011, 07:56:03 UTC
ah, soohyun xDD his voice is totally awesome.really? hmm for me, i'm okay with it..it's just that i prefer them being 9 members altogether rater than dropping xander and kibum out :/ but all in all, at least they're happy. hehehe

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