Comments | two_bitty: Jurassic Park (Suits , Mike/Harvey)

two_bitty

Jurassic Park (Suits , Mike/Harvey)

Jul 17, 2011 21:40

Suits
Jurassic Park
Paring: Mike/Harvey
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Unbeta'd. Epic man kissing.
A/N: I can't remember for the life of me who or where I got this line of thought from, but I decided that it fitted Harvey nearly perfectly. And I'd be a little more afraid of Harvey than an actual raptor.

Considering how many times Harvey arrived at his cubicle, ( Read more... )

apartment, mike, suits, harvey, kiss, slash

Comments 9

rainbow_goddess July 18 2011, 02:27:11 UTC

That has got to be a kiss for the record books. :-) I love the last line: "There goes that damned velociraptor again."

shinzara July 18 2011, 04:03:11 UTC

I HAD to comment on this because that was just bloody brilliant!
best.written.kiss.ever

Everything was so realistic I could picture it in my head. Just amazing!

mrsreynolds13 July 18 2011, 15:36:50 UTC

oh. my. god.
THAT is how to write a kiss scene. It was so beautifully described and I could visualise it perfectly.
Thank you so much for this!

curgypsy July 18 2011, 19:35:26 UTC

Damn...that kiss actually turned me on! Thank you for writing this.

two_bitty July 18 2011, 19:51:54 UTC

Mission success!

storylandqueen July 19 2011, 22:26:18 UTC

I don't think I've ever read a kiss so intense before. I've never seen someone take the time to make it so detailed and involved before and it gives this emotional impact to the scene that's really impressive. I certainly hope to see more from you and hopefully in this story.

Also, random, I love the multicolor text on your journal, it's so vibrant and pretty.

two_bitty July 20 2011, 03:33:28 UTC

You make me smile so much. This is why I write. I like to give people something that they've never seen. (and I like seeing different reactions) I'm working on one of those "Harvey gives Mike a backub!" stories and it should be posted in a few hours, if you're interested. *wink wink nudge nudge*

I thought the same, too, about the layout. I haven't seen any other journals laid out like this. Linkage button thing is in my User Bio if you want to go see other layouts by the same person.

storylandqueen July 20 2011, 06:31:19 UTC

I think that's a beautiful reason to tell a story - but really, isn't that what it's all about? Exposing people to new places and introducing them to things they've never experienced?

That sounds like it could be a very sensual, emotionally revealing story and you can definitely count on me to read it (and possibly gush about it, if it's as appealing as this).

Oh, thank you so much. You're quite the handy enabler, aren't you? I've actually been rather dissatisfied with my layout as of late, so I'll definitely check that out.