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twittchy

The Name of the Game is Hentai!

Jul 26, 2004 00:06

Well, as I expected, I speant my entire day driving in a fugging car, from four in the morning until 8 at night. And then to find out that the doctors didn't really do tiddilywink for mother either. The health care system just plain sucks! People should give money to it. I would, but I'm broke. x.x (remember people, the world is full of hypocrites ( Read more... )

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evilclarence July 26 2004, 00:31:53 UTC

*Faints* Beautiful. I'm jealous of your skills! Now, what would happen if Sasuke found out? ...hmmm

Amazing job. I LOVED IT! ^^

twittchy July 26 2004, 08:10:19 UTC

Heh; *pours could water on j00 in attempts to wake up* o.O; There isn't really anything to be jelous of '>_> Sasuke would be pissed. x.x; I could probably sum up the next few chapters down when Sasuke odes find out in three words. "Sasuke ish Pissed."

X.x;

evilclarence July 26 2004, 15:00:06 UTC

Heh heh, I kinda figured as much. Sasuke can be such a bastard sometimes. *le sigh*

twittchy July 26 2004, 15:22:39 UTC

Always Well.. In the Kakasaku fanfictions anyways. X.x; He's almoust always the villian then.

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alucards_death July 26 2004, 00:47:44 UTC

i love ur stories(the ones that i read n e wayz! mind if i add u?

twittchy July 26 2004, 08:07:41 UTC

Don't mind at all ^_^ I don't have many friends.. xD

cuito July 26 2004, 10:03:14 UTC

Awesome chapter!! ^_^

twittchy July 31 2004, 12:03:37 UTC

Thankies ^_^ <3

<3 ya_chan July 26 2004, 22:34:21 UTC

augh. I've never been huge into commenting on people's stuff. But.. I just had to comment on this! *hugs tight* I loved all three chapters! They were lovely! This chapter though, was probably my favorite. It was... adorable. Augh, I can't put into words the greatness. You have plenty of talent. *Plenty*. If ya ever need an extra beta-reader or just someone to show off your mad skillz to be sure to drop me a line. :D

~S

Re: <3 twittchy July 27 2004, 09:03:50 UTC

Thanks a lot! *ish suished by tight hug* Breathing...Is....Nice. x___X;

Anyways; thank you. The sex scenes always seem to be people's faveorites. X.x Proves what a bunch of perverts well all are. X.x; I'll keep you in mind for soem beta reading ^_^ I need to find someone for my Inu stories, but I think J.L want's me to let him do that. X_x;

chakrabat July 27 2004, 04:47:44 UTC

Holy crap! That was a very long (*snicker snicker*) but beautifully written chapter. Them sex scenes are toughies, but you really got this one down! I still see mistakes with spelling and grammar, but they're little things that can be easily edited. A new thing, though, I've been noticing you use a lot of the same words or phrases. It's good to have variety in your story, and for the most part, you've been using a lot of it.

Keep up with the great work! Can't wait to read the next chapter! ^_^

twittchy July 27 2004, 08:59:15 UTC

Length is good. X.x; These chapters carry away with me. I just..kinda..watch the words pop out onto the screen as a type them. It's kinda freaky actually. o.O;

I tend to use phrases and things which I think leave a good impression, or really get the point across. And half the time I'm writing these chapters at like four in the mornin, x.x; So it's hard to remember what phrases I've used before, and which ones i havn't. x.x; Anyways; Thanks a lot for commenting. ^_^

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