Fanfic: Prayers to Broken Stone (Doctor Who)

[twitchbell]

Title: Prayers to Broken Stone
Author: twitchbell
Fandom: Doctor Who
Rating: PG13
Characters: Eleventh Doctor, Jack Harkness
Pairing: Eleventh Doctor/Jack Harkness
Summary: Jack Harkness encounters a new Doctor, one who's not quite himself and who seems set on putting the moves on Jack.
Word count: 4193
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. '

Comments

[canaana]

Delightfully sweet. Though I was rather amused by the drunk Doctor, trying to find his legs.

[twitchbell]

Poor Doctor - I couldn't resist putting that bit in! Glad you enjoyed it.

[sahiya]

And I don't know quite what sort of line it is. In fact, I think there might be several lines, and some of them are a little wonky and not quite right.

*grins* I love this fic for so many reasons, but that description of the Doctor's relationship with River is just perfect.

[twitchbell]

*grins back* It's going to be very interesting to see how their relationship pans out in the end, that's for sure. Glad you liked the story.

[heintz57]

If the Doctor and Jack ever meet again this is just how it should play out. The conversation was deep and the kiss was hot. I really like the last part when the Doctor reaches for the TARDIS. I think this version of the TARDIS and the Doctor are closer more bonded

[twitchbell]

Well, I guess if Jack ever does to get meet up with Eleven we might get deep conversation, but I won't hold my breath for a hot kiss!

Yeah, I also feel that this TARDIS and this Doctor are a little more closely bonded than before - I love the way she teases him in the missing scenes from Season 5!

[heintz57]

Yeah I love the missing scenes of season 5. I also love the new look of the TARDIS she is quite beautiful. I hope the next season they utilize that bond a bit more.

[twitchbell]

I'd like to see that, too.