002. Bittersweet Mistake [4th chapter]

Aug 20, 2009 00:22



Pairing: Onew/Key, Jokwon/Jaebum
Rating: Pg-16 (Possible NC-17 in future chapters)
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pairing : jaebum/jokwon, !fanfic, pairing : onew/key

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geenkey August 20 2009, 08:43:30 UTC
OMO! i was like yaaay~ an update!! dont worry i'll wait 4 ur update, school is important! hwaiting!!

oh finally! good job kibum! being honest is the basic thing 4 the relationship! hahahaha *yeah right!!*

well dnt worry, jinki will cmbck 2 u just give him some times.. hohoho...

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geenkey August 20 2009, 08:47:35 UTC
WAIT! ME? 1ST? YAAAAAAY!! hehehehehehehehehehe! :-):-):-):-)

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twisty_lime August 20 2009, 11:39:26 UTC
Wah! You are first! I'm always surprised when someone spot the fic on my journal XD I always thought nobody reads my fics here! (except Misschatelle)

Thank you for reading and leaving a comment!!!

Yes! Jinki will come back, maybe!

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hp_groupie August 20 2009, 10:59:57 UTC
Okay. I've been ninja! up on your fanfics, BUT OMFG YAY that you updated! The writing is good, the characterizations are wonderful, and it's not to parallel a world that I could ACTUALLY picture something like this happening. I don't even SHIP Onkey, but I'm falling into this story. Keep it up! I want to stay updated! : )

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twisty_lime August 20 2009, 11:44:55 UTC
I think it's the first time somedy said so many nice things on one of my fanfiction!! Thank you!! <3

Thank you!! I'm happy you like the story even if you don't ship Onkey!

And I hope you'll still like it in the future ^-^

Thank you for reading and leaving a comment!!!

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hp_groupie August 20 2009, 11:59:38 UTC
Oh, no problem! I enjoy fanfiction, but a lot of stuff *looks around* just SUCKS, lol. You're one of maybe...five stories that I've actually decided to follow that didn't make me roll my eyes, ahaha.

Again, you're welcome.

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misschatelle August 20 2009, 19:34:07 UTC
We'll I'll spot to make sure I'll be third and not fourth D:

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misschatelle August 20 2009, 21:03:56 UTC
He had fun pretending to be unable to open his bottles of water, exposing more skin than needed, Using PMS as an excuse for his moodiness, feigning to be cold to get a hug and lots of other little things he could turn into advantages for him.
XD!! I think Kibum is in a constant state of PMS. "His week" means the one NOT in PMS.

Jinki blinked a few times and stopped in his movement, looking at Kibum guiltily, as if he had just broken something expensive.
Aaaaw~ poor little thing!! *hugs*

And with that, he left an half-dressed and very uneasy Kibum behind. The younger boy covered himself with the covers, not bearing to see the skirt he was still wearing.
YOU'RE STILL IN YOUR ROOMMATE'S ROOM!!!
...Okay, I'll shut up ^^'
*imagines roommate that comes back, only to find Kibum in his bed, wearing only a skirt*... XD

The only person left to call was Jokwon, and he wasn't too sure how he would react, so he settled to deal with this by himself. I don't think Jokwon would be mad XD (If he had to be, he would be mad at Kibum.... but still ( ... )

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misschatelle August 20 2009, 21:04:34 UTC
I'm stupid, I pressed "Post comment when I wasn't even done XD I

I am so spamming your comment list XD

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misschatelle August 20 2009, 21:12:06 UTC
He tried to focus his eyes on the road before him, probably thinking that his girlfriend's past affair was not that bad afterall.
What are you saying, it means slash!
Pfft, bus drivers don't get it at all!
...^^'

Oh noooo!!! That was sad!!!

Come on, Jinki! You're gay now! Deal with it!! Don't try to protest! YOU ARE! o.o

..............UPDATE!?o.o

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twisty_lime August 21 2009, 11:20:02 UTC
What is this!? You spam my comment box with comments!? D:

Jinki blinked a few times and stopped in his movement, looking at Kibum guiltily, as if he had just broken something expensive.

Aaaaw~ poor little thing!! *hugs*

cute right!? Poor Jinki~

The bus driver is weird, I didn't know if I should make him a bad or a nice person XD

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XD He's gay for Kibum, he has to deal with it!!

I'll try to update soon!!!!

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