Comments | twisting_fate9: original script; accident

twisting_fate9

original script; accident

Jan 17, 2010 19:23

THIS IS A ORIGINAL PIECE WRITTEN BY ME. ALL CHARACTERS/PLOT ARE IN FACT MINE :)

I don't know if this interests any of you, but I would LOVE if any of you would take the time to read it. It's really short, just a one scene little play; it is a little disturbing but it's the first thing I've finished in forever so I would love some feedback!

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writing, theatre

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lady_drace January 17 2010, 18:42:59 UTC

Eeeeek. That was fucking scary... which means it's great writing. :oD

A few typos/grammar nits here and there, but nothing critical. Keep writing, babe!

twisting_fate9 January 17 2010, 20:40:06 UTC

thanks so much for reading it hun!
<3<3

reality0junkie January 18 2010, 00:57:05 UTC

Wow..
I am in awe.

twisting_fate9 January 18 2010, 04:38:11 UTC

thank you SO much!

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twisting_fate9 January 18 2010, 12:50:58 UTC

Haha, hardly :P
But thanks hun!

foxie_trot January 23 2010, 10:28:45 UTC

Wow my love, this was really good!! I love the darkness of it!! (dark is my one weakness)

I love how there are hints of molestation/abuse, and then that there are hints that the sister died on the stairs, and that you don't find out that the father also died at the same time until the nurse comes in, and you just KNOW that Erin did it. \o/

SO AMAZING. OMG I WANT YOUR AWESOME TALENT.

twisting_fate9 January 23 2010, 10:41:31 UTC

SQUUEEEEE
THANK YOU FOR YOUR KIND WORDS OF AWESOME
*HUGGLES YOU*

I was so nervous about posting this! haha thank you so much my love!
(now when are you going to post any of your writing so i can die over YOUR awesome talent? hmmmm? *prods*)

<3<3<3

foxie_trot January 24 2010, 06:23:58 UTC

*HUGGLES YOU BACK*
IT'S ALL YOU LOVE AND YOUR AMAZING WRITING. =DDD

(My writing is coming! I swear it! At the moment one of my fics [really funky hurt/comfort Uther/Dress!Merlin/Arthur type thing] is with my beta, because I'm having a bit of trouble with it. BUT I'm also working on a few other things, so never fear! I will be posting stuff ... soonish! XDD)

twisting_fate9 January 24 2010, 11:07:46 UTC

I cannot wait! Haha that fic sounds AMAZING! I haven't been working on fanfiction lately, but I still have my 'Uther as an amazing chef who banned SAUCERY in his epic chain of epic restaurants and Arthur being his promising talented son and littlechef Merlin coming in to teach Arthur the wonders of saucery (and gay sex!)' but that will probably be on hold as I have two other original short pieces in mind xD Ones another short play (but longer than this one.. i'll hopefully get a full Act with like 4 scenes or so) and ones a short story :)

<3<3

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