Lips of An Angel - Act One: I Wish I Had An Angel, Scene I

Apr 27, 2007 01:23

Title: Lips of An Angel - Act One, Scene I
Fandom: The Phantom of the Opera
Rating: R overall for violence, abuse, language, and sensuality.
Summary: The first scene in what is going to be quite a long phanfiction.
Author's Note: This phiclet has a load of ALW influence, being my crack at novelizing the musical, with a dash of Susan Kay and Leroux ( Read more... )

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mollypocket April 28 2007, 02:55:18 UTC
♥ ♥

I'm so touched by your dedication. :3 I do luff mah Tiffy-poo.

Bwaaaah, it's refreshing to see the corps de ballet acting like young girls--mean girls--and not little angels.

Admit it, woman. Madeleine is your way of being mean to Erik's mom without directly doing it. *wink wink* What a bitch. I want to see Madame Giry rip her a new one. Ah, You completely remind me why I always love the Giry family. Meg is just so doe-eyed and friendly. Her mom....is not. X3

0.0 ...are you thinking what I'm thinking? >_> _> We needs em at der poly!!!

I look forward to reading more. ♥

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twisted_satyr April 28 2007, 06:32:08 UTC
Well, I do lurve my Molly-chan. ♥

It only makes sense. There's obviously quite a bit of competition (just look at the way Carlotta behaves!), and it only stands to reason that there would be competition amongst the ballerinas as well. Girls can be very, very mean - even more cruel than boys, at times. And you never know what might drive a young girl who felt that her place was being intruded on.

Perhaaaaaps. >_> Actually, I just picked a well-known french name. XD But, now that you mention it, that could very well be true. :x And YES, WE NEED THEM AT POLY. ♥

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claireydid April 28 2007, 08:06:55 UTC
I absolutely love this! It's such a relief to see the depth of Christine's history written so well, and you wrenched my heart with the approach to Gustav's death. I really like the realistic approach to how the girls behaved, the bitchiness and rivalry seems as natural as the need for companionship where young girls are concerned, so it's good to see that embodied so realistically.

All in all...well done sweet! I'll be keeping an eye out for this one! ♥

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