twd fic: In the Heat of the Night

[twisted_ream]

Teehee.
Character/Pairing: Glenn/Daryl (because Glenn is obviously the dominating one in this ship)
Rated NC-17 for sex and language
Words: 2,365
Summary: Read Prompt but basically, sex in a room full of sleeping people.
Notes: How did this stretch into a 2000-worded porn..

Comments

[p_sharkbait]

Ohoho you two! Rick's gonna be so disappointed in the morning! But yeah Rick, give 'em a break, they need this! :)) Shane waking up a bit made me LOL.

All the lovely details close to my pervy heart are in this fic. Barebacking, thigh-caressing, plenty of kissing, agressive!Glenn... so many things to be happy about. And of course, the sexy times are so hot. Unf. Their clumsy attempts at keeping quiet is so amusing to read and all the biting! So sexay.

I just want to smoosh pissy and stubborn Glenn here! It is such an adorable sight to see him this way, it makes my heart flutter. I love it when he does what he wants. I can totally see him smirking into that kiss with Daryl. Speaking of which, I am smitten by all the sweet kisses they did. The one on the side of the ear is precious. Also, I love it when Glenn caressed Daryl's cheek!

[twisted_ream]

You make me cry now
I feel so accomplished . This is so at the base of how I picture the characters.
-even though the writing wasn't that great
;_;
But you know I bet Daryl's gonna wake up before everybody else like he always does and shoos Glenn off lol that would be so fantastic. Imagine a scene in the show where you can like see Glenn leaving Daryl's tent or something and you'd be like, wait, did that just happen? Who's sleeping there? :o
Or Daryl like zipping his pants after he and Glenn walks out of some abandoned spot, those kind of so subtle moments you just wonder about for a moment
Although I doubt it, somehow I have high hopes for the slash in the scripts

[p_sharkbait]

I'm not a critic, but I do enjoy your style! :) I am entertained and I love the visuals so I don't have any problems with it at all.

LOL Oh myyyy that image! Stop making me want such things to happen in canon! xDD
I always have high hopes for slash too, but I have zero expectations. But sometimes my hopes and expectations get blurred together. D:
If they give a scene like that, I might faint. :')