50 Shades of Lisbeth

Mar 25, 2013 19:49

Title: 50 Shades of Lisbeth
Author: aprilp_katje
Fandom(s): Fifty Shades of Grey; Millennium trilogy
Word Count: 1682
Rating: R
Inspiration: Wanting to make Ana's break-up at the end of FSoG stick AND get Grey some well-deserved punishment, Lisbeth style.
Warnings: Mild violence, mild language, adult situations
50 Shades of Lisbeth )

book: fifty shades of grey, character: anastasia steele, rating: r, character: other female, character: christian grey, warning: violence

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Lovely ;) barbayat March 27 2013, 00:57:12 UTC
He so deserves this. And I loved the master of the universe reference - pure gold :D

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Re: Lovely ;) aprilp_katje March 27 2013, 01:01:20 UTC
Hee. Thanks. :)

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Re: Lovely ;) hoppytoad79 March 27 2013, 01:46:10 UTC
Agreed.

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Re: Lovely ;) aprilp_katje March 27 2013, 01:48:40 UTC
Thanks. :)

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gehayi March 27 2013, 01:03:46 UTC
I love this story. It's exactly what he deserves. However, it looks like your LJ-cut didn't work. Could you please fix it?

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aprilp_katje March 27 2013, 01:19:36 UTC
I love this story. It's exactly what he deserves.

Thanks. :)

However, it looks like your LJ-cut didn't work. Could you please fix it?

I think I got it this time. I think the "visual editor" setting was a lil wonky. Should've just stuck with HTML. :)

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hoppytoad79 March 27 2013, 01:48:09 UTC
The tat she put on his chest will guarantee no woman wants to be with him again, so his celibacy is guaranteed even if he decided to ignore Lisbeth's orders. ;)

Siccing Lisbeth on him was completely fitting.

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aprilp_katje March 27 2013, 01:51:05 UTC
I thought she was especially well suited for doling out punishment on Grey.

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celticlonging March 27 2013, 10:28:02 UTC
I love it! I *love* it!

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aprilp_katje March 27 2013, 10:30:33 UTC
::happy dance::

Thanks, I was hoping folks here would enjoy it. :)

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ruana1 March 27 2013, 10:50:15 UTC
Errrr.... Kate had security cameras installed in the apartment without informing Ana? In Ana's bedroom? Monitored by a total stranger, no less?

Sorry, your heroines don't come out of this one any better than Christian.

(Edited to clear up rotten sentence structure.)

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aprilp_katje March 27 2013, 11:03:42 UTC
Point taken.

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ruana1 March 27 2013, 11:10:41 UTC
Still a fine tale if you find a way to clear up the ick factor. That part of the book was most satisfying!

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aprilp_katje March 27 2013, 11:16:36 UTC
Thanks.

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