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Rational Reactions

Aug 31, 2012 10:57

Title: Rational Reactions

Author:Mibamonster

Fandom(s): Fifty Shades of Grey

Rating: PG-13

Word Count: 998

Inspiration: The beginning of Chapter 5 of Fifty Shades of Grey

Summary: 'You're lucky I'm just scolding you.' "What do you mean?" 'Well, if you were mine, you wouldn't be able to sit down for a week after the stunt you pulled yesterday.' What if ( Read more... )

book: fifty shades of grey, rating: g, character: anastasia steele, rating: pg-13, length: 500-1000, spitefic type: how it should have gone, genre: drama

Comments 3

sinestris September 4 2012, 06:16:19 UTC

He actually talks to her like that and she TAKES it?

Mein gott. I need to stay even further away from that series than I thought.

Excellent spitefic, though! Nice to see Ana kicking ass.

albion_witch September 4 2012, 13:07:01 UTC

Ah, so you wrote this story. I read it when it was FF.net. It was cathartic, but you should really change the rating, especially with the repeated f-bombs.

mibamonster September 4 2012, 19:00:22 UTC

I changed the rating to PG-13. :)