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fragrantwoods July 5 2012, 22:40:52 UTC
I like this quite a lot. Love the ghostly poorly defined secondary characters :-) And the "write when you get work" line was used to great effect. Well done and I hope there's more.

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stormswift July 7 2012, 23:29:19 UTC
And the "write when you get work" line was used to great effect.

My mom loves that line. I'm embarrassed to admit how often it's found its way into my general speech.

And don't worry! There's definitely more.

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hyperactivator July 6 2012, 00:12:51 UTC
I'm really liking these characters.

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stormswift July 7 2012, 23:26:14 UTC
Thanks! I love hearing that.

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mage_apprentice July 6 2012, 01:12:48 UTC
When you're a Jet, you're a Jet all the way! From your first cigarette to your last dyin' day!

And nice use of the Harry Potter reference.

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stormswift July 7 2012, 23:25:37 UTC
Thanks! It's neither the first nor the last Harry Potter reference...or misplaced pop culture reference in general :)

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