Title: Justice is Blind
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sos_sporkersFandom(s): The Twilight series
Rating: PG-13 for content (R for thematic elements)
Word Count: 2209
Inspiration: A Twilight fanfiction (The Dark Side of the Moon) in which Edward claims that the absolute worst thing he can do is turn Bella.
Warnings: Lots and lots of murder or implied murder, but nothing is graphic.
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*nods*
Good job.
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But he really isn't killing indiscriminately here. Each and every one of my characters here had done something that canon!Edward didn't approve of. I didn't know if I managed to convey that or not, though, but the point is, given his canon personality, he actually WOULD consider these people to be sinners and a menace to society.
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The idea of someone like Wardo judging people is insanly scary, and you did a very good of bringing that accross.
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and yes, I agree. Given that he was killing the people HE considered to be sinful and evil...well, there's bound to be a lot of bias, and we've seen what insane morals canon!Edward has...
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XDD I did that too! Edward totally has the exact same voice as Light in my head.
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I don't want to look like a whore, but I'd really like to know what I did right.
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