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Fic: For You, I Will

Nov 26, 2011 21:32

Title: For You, I Will
Author: Das Mervin
Beta: Gehayi
Rating: Hard R for violence, sexual content, thematic elements, language
Word Count: 7,700
Warnings: Rape, violence, abuse.
Inspiration: Chapter 8 “ Imprint” in Eclipse.
Summary: “And you would do anything for her, be anything for her… You become whatever she needs you to be, whether that’s a ( Read more... )

character: other male, warning: rape, book: eclipse, genre: drama, book: twilight series general, warning: abuse, genre: horror/suspense, character: wolf pack, warning: violence, spitefic type: logical extreme, length: 5000-10000

Comments 72

lurkeriatipsos November 27 2011, 06:52:37 UTC

Quick, take these cookies before I puke all over them.

das_mervin November 27 2011, 20:16:55 UTC

*snatches them away* Um, thank you? :D

lurkeriatipsos November 28 2011, 01:12:36 UTC

It was positively vomit-inducing, which means it did what it set out to do. As Film Crit Hulk would say, IT TRANSCENDENT.

evanesco75 November 27 2011, 10:03:37 UTC

Fucking brilliant. And absolutely horrific. Fuck, I can't stop thinking about it.

das_mervin November 27 2011, 20:16:24 UTC

I'm kind of the same way in the "can't stop thinking about it" department. Gehayi and I have pretty much mapped out exactly what happens after all of this. It ain't too pleasant. Needless to say, Melanie is here to stay. And it's not a good thing.

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das_mervin November 27 2011, 20:15:34 UTC

Thank you!

southerngaelic November 27 2011, 11:45:12 UTC

O-O

O-O

O-O

southerngaelic November 27 2011, 19:58:08 UTC

Also, d'you have a link for the FF.net posting? I like to nose around Twispite fics and read the responses of Twihards Not. Getting It.

das_mervin November 27 2011, 20:15:10 UTC

Oh, good--horrified! That's what I like to see. :D

Sure thing. Amazingly enough, I've actually gotten a review where someone says she'll never think of imprinting as true love again. GOOD. YOU SHOULDN'T.

And yes, I'm really hoping for a Twihard to tell me how I've got it all wrong. I know I shouldn't, but....DAMMIT, I WANNA CANON A TWIHARD.

emmram November 27 2011, 12:04:27 UTC

At first I was amused at the mention of a Dodge Charger up there, and then it was all one jaw-dropping, super-horrifying, amazing, terrifyingly terrific ride.

Brava!

das_mervin November 27 2011, 20:12:54 UTC

I have no idea why I gave her a Dodge Charger, but there you go. Who knows--maybe she stole it.

Thank you! I am glad to have horrified.