The Price of Arrogance

[amadris]

Title: The Price of Arrogance
Author: amadris 
Fandom(s): Twilight
Rating: R just to be safe
Word Count: 898
Inspiration: Written as to illustrate what would really happen if a person was driving 100 mp/h in the night, not keeping their eyes in the road.
Warnings: Character death
Summary: Edward Cullen is finally forced to realize the depth of his own

Comments

[hyperactivator]

Nicely done.

[kseenaa]

Like my hubby always says, even if he don't plan on crashing, some other idiot (or animal) might have other plans... Very realistic. Very touching. Very nice.

[amadris]

Indeed. It doesn't really help that the guy is speeding like a maniac and half the time he stares at Bella instead of road ahead. Even if you are a telepath, you can't know if there is something on the road - like a fallen tree or a stray animal. Plus your car doesn't have your super reflexes and even if it did, the laws of physics don't just bend down in the front your awesome vampireness. Ed is such an inconsiderate prick.

[amadris]

Thanks! I sought for somewhat minimalistic style, and I think I succeeded quite well. Sometimes the simplest words can be more powerful than some overly done descriptions.