Alone, With You

Oct 20, 2010 15:13

My first fic!
For the sharp_teeth comment fic meme --
Prompt from smilla02 : "Paraphrased from tv.tropes: surreal, disjointed, dreamscapes filled with bizarre imagery, that say goodbye to logic and sanity in the process. Prompt: mirrors, mirrors everywhere. (Would prefer Dean, but any character is good.)"

Title: Alone, With You
Characters: Dean, Sam
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sharp_teeth, supernatural fic, prompted, sam & dean

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roque_clasique October 21 2010, 01:32:44 UTC
Oh, CREEPY. So creepy, all the mirrors and the Sams and what's real and what isn't and who is and who isn't, SO FREAKY. Nicely done!!

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twirlycurls October 21 2010, 01:58:01 UTC
Thank you so much for reading! I found the sharp_teeth comment fic-thing through your journal so thank you for that, too. It's such fun and there are so many great stories there already. :)

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smilla02 October 21 2010, 08:09:28 UTC
This is perfect. You used the mirror imagery so well, I could see dean's sanity slipping with each Sam he had to kill.

I find myself weirdly comforted by the last scene, though.

Go on, write more, and thank you for this!

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twirlycurls October 21 2010, 14:34:01 UTC
Thank you so much, and thanks for such a fun prompt. I will definitely write more -- we have such great inspirations. :)

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mymuseandi October 23 2010, 01:13:00 UTC
This is pretty creepy. And Dean having to kill so many Sams! *shivers*

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twirlycurls October 23 2010, 02:28:07 UTC
Thank you so much for reading!

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borgmama1of5 October 23 2010, 02:07:32 UTC
You totally freaked me out!

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twirlycurls October 23 2010, 02:28:39 UTC
In that case, mission accomplished! :)

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twirlycurls October 24 2010, 21:19:53 UTC
What a lovely comment -- thank you very much for reading and yes, that's one of the things I had in mind for this story. :) Their heaven was shared, so why wouldn't Sam's hell be too? And of course Dean wouldn't just leave him there to suffer all on his lonesome!

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