Comments | twirlingleaves: the light's too bright, or maybe it's just the way your smile makes my head spin.

twirlingleaves

the light's too bright, or maybe it's just the way your smile makes my head spin.

Jan 02, 2008 01:02

HEY GUYS, THIS IS 4_03_am'S RYOPI FICLET. when everything's made to be broken, I just want you to know who I am. I HOPE YOU LIKE IT, RHEYNE. *BEAMS* It's... kinda weird. And angsty. And... there are probably lots of mistakes because I'm tired and I CAN'T WRITE FIC IN PAST TENSE AND SECOND PERSON, CRIES. (DON'T ASK ME WHY I TRIED.) SO PLEASE POINT OUT ANY ( Read more... )

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Comments 12

procreational January 2 2008, 01:27:53 UTC

And you looked at Pi and you thought that the sempais are right. Bad things happen and dreams get broken. Pi didn’t really talk to anyone, but then nobody else did, either. He just talked to you, mostly, and although you thought he could be annoying and a bit too whiny sometimes, you didn’t blame him, because you saw that expression on his face when he thought no one was looking, and it was tired and hurt and lost. You let him annoy you, because of that.
kjdaghsljshjkahdjshjsdjs FUCKING DEAD. ;________; WHY IS THIS REALLY BEAUTIFUL. I think the best part is that this is also completely plausible! Well, mostly plausible anyways! I love plausibility in fic. ♥ YOUR MORUICHI INTRIGUES ME. HE ALWAYS DOES. I WISH HE HADN'T LEFT. :( I also like your ninja!Jin cameo. I like Pin together, that's all (God, I am so fucking lame). They are so utterly BFFL!!!1! and I love how elitist they are about that BFFL!!1!1-ness and how hard it makes it for other people to break into that bond ( ... )

snowqueenofhoth January 2 2008, 05:10:44 UTC

YOUR MORUICHI INTRIGUES ME. HE ALWAYS DOES. I WISH HE HADN'T LEFT.

I agree with the intriguing bit. It's sort of something I wish I could ask him. But like Ryo, no questions. It'd be awkward. I'm sort of glad he left though, because ONE OK ROCK is pretty kickass; he's done well for himself. :D
He's so not a Johnny's type, anyway. But so sweet. Man, I love that kid.

twirlingleaves January 2 2008, 17:59:51 UTC

CLAREEEE. <3 Thank you so much for the comment. Moriuchi intrigues me too. Pretty much everyone who leaves JE intrigues me. You know, what would have happened to them if they stayed? Would they have become the NEXT BIG THING. Why did they leave, anyway? And actually, THE WHOLE OF GODDAMN JE INTRIGUES ME. Every single thing that goes on within JE is such a mystery and I wish I could know what's really going on.

And lol I love how you just started rambling about Jin. ♥ True, they're totally BFFL!!!1! and it's awesome and I LOVE THEM kja;skdj god you're making me want to read Pin fic right now. HEY LOOK I SPY PIN FIC ON FLIST. *BEAMS*

I ALWAYS ADD RANDOM TAGS THAT AREN'T ACTUALLY VERY HELPFUL. AND SOMETIMES THEY'RE ONLY EVER USED ONCE, EVER. POINTLESS BUT FUN. TAGS FTW!!!1!

elaeye January 2 2008, 01:37:24 UTC

You’re still okay.

omg. You. what. WHAT
nine of them, the history with NEWS, the Eito-rabu, the-the Jin cameos, the ramen wtfff~ The fic is so tangible and wonderfully self-based like Ryo should be with just the right touch of bitterness and-andand...
ilu♥♥

twirlingleaves January 2 2008, 17:43:47 UTC

CHRISSY. *BEAMS* ILU2. ♥♥♥ I'm glad you liked it! And I'm glad you thought that it was 'wonderfully self-based like Ryo should be' because I was really worried that it didn't really sound like Ryo, because I don't really write Ryo much but kajs;djaksd THANK YOU FOR THE COMPLIMENTS. <3

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twirlingleaves January 2 2008, 17:41:36 UTC

TILLYYYYYYYYYY.

*SPARKLES AND IS AMAZING* 8D

ILU.

kimmy_luv January 2 2008, 06:01:54 UTC

@____@

I think... this is the second NEWS fic I've read so far. AND IT WINS!

You can always get away with things like repeating lines and still make the fic flow so well. WAH!

Once again, I admire the brevity with which you can convey so many emotions and tie readers into the story.

*jealousy*

twirlingleaves January 2 2008, 17:46:06 UTC

I'M GLAD YOU LIKED IT. *BEAMS* This is like the second NEWS fic I've written, haha. Sort of. Anyway thank you so much for the comment. <3 I HAVE A KIND OF OBSESSION WITH REPEATING LINES. 8Dv

yuxo January 2 2008, 06:45:13 UTC

....no no no no No No No NO NO NO NO NUOOOOO

AHHHHHHHHH f;alskdjf;aLIREWPU(*/w7R098Q3WP4TKJ:lsakegj:lksa;HGLKHAEST dying dying DYING DYING DYING *falls dead*

KAZE. D: SHOW SOME MANNERS. KILLING ME ON NEW YEARS DAY?!?! DDDD:

But. I. Love you. like. a lot a lot. lot. ;______;

asd;lkfj RYOPI a;sldkjf WIN WIN and RYO OH GOD THE SAD AND NINE OF THEM AND AND AND DIRTY ROOM SEX a;sldkfj;l THAT TURNS ME ON WHY

...

*hiding* I have no prompt to give. ;_;

twirlingleaves January 2 2008, 17:37:52 UTC

I LOVE YOU TOO, YUXI. *BEAMS* <3 I'M SORRY I KILLED YOU. That was probably not my intention. But really I'm so glad you liked it and the dirty room sex lololol.

NO YUXI NO, I KNOW YOU HAVE A PROMPT, GIVE ME THE PROMPTTTTTTT SO I CAN KILL YOU MOAR. WITH LOVE, OF COURSE. 8D