Matter of Perspective

[sideslip_tf]

Title: Matter of Perspective (Chapter 1 - Attraction)
Author: sideswipe_tf
Verse: G1
Rating: PG
Characters: Ratchet, Sunstreaker, Sideswipe
Warnings: none

Comments

[renegadewriter8]

T.T The perspective of all of them are just perfect! Bittersweet but so lovely. Sunny and Sides' though break my heart, and I hope they can get their medic *cries while cheering them on*

[sideslip_tf]

*waves banner for the twins*

I thought this might be a good way to get the thoughts and perspective of each member involved. I already have a feeling that it will be very interesting having three points of view for each incident or event.

[darkeyes_17]

I really enjoyed Sideswipe's last line about all he wants to do is make Ratchet smile. ^^ so cute.

As for Ratch and Sunny, man do those two need a confidence boost.

Great job so far. I'll put an author tag for you.

[sideslip_tf]

Thank you for the tag!

I liked the part about the smile too. I can just imagine Sideswipe peeking around a corner hoping to catch a glimpse of a smile!

[velvet_infinity]

Ooooh. can't wait for more ^^

[sideslip_tf]

More is on the way. I have ideas for several scenes.

[chimeradark]

I admire you 100 word drabble writers...I couldn't do it...I tend to go overboard but you managed to capture the feeling behind it all without saying much.

I look forward to the next set!

[sideslip_tf]

Thank you! I am trying to stretch my writing skills and this seemed like one way to do it. Sometimes less is more? It is forcing me to focus my thoughts to just a few key words (and so far it has been fun).

[fuzipenguin]

Lovely. The three Drabble format works so well

[sideslip_tf]

Thanks! Sometimes if the POV switches back and forth in a story I get a bit confused. This way, it is clear (or at least clearer) what is going on. (I hope.)