Fiction: A Study in the Classics

[kay_cricketed]

Series: Three Cities
Title: Tokyo: A Study in the Classics
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Eventual Hikaru x Kaoru x Tamaki
Summary: Three cities. Three stories. In the second of these, Kaoru sneaks home in the early morning, shares his kitchen and a little culture with Tamaki, and is resolutely no longer in denial (just despair).

First Part - Paris

Comments

[stirring_still]

I really like this, as I really liked the first one. It's lovely and understated, and very believable. Thank you for writing and posting it!

[kay_cricketed]

Oh, thank you so much! <3 I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and it means a lot that you find it believable. :)

Many thanks for the feedback! Mm, your icon is love.

[stirring_still]

I really enjoyed all the focus on detail; the taste of the drinks, the way Tamaki rinses the glasses, the descriptions of movements and tones of voice. Very very nice. And this:

he thinks that Hikaru should be pressed against his ribs watching this.

Just lovely. <3 And thank you for the icon-compliment, it's my default, but I thought it fitted well with the whole "rich Japanese people" theme. ^^

[kay_cricketed]

Thank you so much... =^^=

I'm a sucker for the details - sometimes too much. XD I'm glad they came through nicely.

It does fit totally well with the rich Japanese people theme! I obviously need a rich people icon. The closest I can get is this (see above). XD

[demi_rabbit]

-screamage- WONDERFUL NESS! If it weren't ridiculously early for me, I would probably rant about my favorite parts, but I can't focus on it! I just, like- arg- meow- woof- LOVE!!! I love it, and I cannot wait for more.

[kay_cricketed]

*blushes hotly* THank you... <3<3<3

So glad you liked it enough to MEOW. XD XD YAAAAAAAAY!