Fic: "White Feather" (Arthur/Eames) Chapter 2
Title: White Feather
Rating: PG-13
Summary: The one where Eames is color blind…
Written for this prompt for the inception_kink meme. Eames POV. This story runs parallel to Black Moon-the one where Arthur is touch deprived and battles OCD. Both stories can be read alone but encouraged to be read together as it will make more sense later. The stories ( Read more... )
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~Thedummie2
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Glad youre liking it!
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I feel so bad for Eames though..I almost cried when I wrote this!
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Glad you like both stories
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Like I sadi in the other story, I simply love what you've done with Eames' past. And I like how you construct the story, different from overanalyzing brain of Arthur. Eames is quick, much more than other people, he absorbs the knowledge, in my POV, he does not need spend time looking from all angles, he just has/just see all the angles...I like this difference. He watches, but he really see, which blend splendly with the idea of him not seing colours, isn't so?
I still wonder how his dreams are? that's why he didn't want for them to be in one of him, but then how he forges people later' how he become the best?...hm, I can't wait for more.
ah, and I like the idea that these two stories will become one. The separate tales seems good to me, as is not only a matter of two different POV of the same story, they are two story, till the two of them will interact daily, i hope...
Thanks so much for writing this.
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Thank you again!❤
You're right-he doesn't want to go into his dreams with Arthur but there are other reasons then what you think... But you're right, it's mostly because of his color blindness.
They may "interact daily"...we'll see. You'll have to keep reading.
You're picking up on everything and that's good! As all these things are important-as are the dreams they will share together :)
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