Fret (part 2)

Aug 05, 2011 16:30

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mimblexwimble August 6 2011, 19:46:11 UTC
Oh, this was excellent! I've never seen Morael in fic before, and I love how you used him. I think the lore is that he can't cause undue dread, and of course, purifying Sam wouldn't be "undue" in his mind.

Somehow, it worse because fear wasn't the only the Morael instilled in Sam. Making sure he feared Dean? Making sure he believed Morael was his protector, even after the angel caused him so much suffering? I hope Castiel can find something to help him, because I don't know what Dean can do. ;_;

I liked how you came full circle, with the fight the boys had. Those are the last words they exchanged, aren't they? It made my heart ache. I'm going to have to pretend Sam will be just fine, with time. Yes? Yes!

Thank you for sharing this! I really enjoyed it!

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twilightshours August 10 2011, 17:57:11 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm terribly glad you liked it. I'm far from an expert on angels; I just went off of what I had scraped up a year or so back. But I agree, "purifying" Sam would be seen as a somewhat justified cause for invoking all that fear. However, at this point in his timeline, Morael found reason in everything he did to Sam, and everyone that tried to stop him failed.

And yes, I hope Castiel can find something as well! I have faith in them. Maybe they'll manage to track down another angel that was the same type as Morael and convince him/her to help, who knows?

Yup, the end is the fight that led all of this. I always struggle with endings, so it seemed suitable.

Thanks for reading!

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twilightshours October 12 2011, 22:55:44 UTC
Thanks very much! I'd like to see a sequel too haha, but I'm not too good at writing them.
I'm glad you liked Morael, too!

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annonie October 12 2011, 15:33:31 UTC
This fic is amazing. I'm shocked it doesn't have more comments. You could really feel Sam's fear and panic when reading it. Great job.

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twilightshours October 12 2011, 23:36:45 UTC
Thanks so much! :) I'm really glad you like it.

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Fantastic!!! mysterymadchen January 1 2012, 05:31:07 UTC
I love blind sam fic's and I really hope the blindness stays in place. Are you on Fanfiction? Thanks for the story and I hope there's more... Have a very happy new year!!

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Re: Fantastic!!! twilightshours January 2 2012, 21:56:57 UTC
Thank you very much! My ff.net username is twilighthours. Same as this username, just with one less S. I'm glad you liked it!

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