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twilightschild9

The Worst Betrayal: Dreams and Omens

Apr 27, 2007 01:38

Title: The Worst Betrayal ( Read more... )

the worst betrayal

Comments 7

sueworld2003 April 27 2007, 07:45:00 UTC

Interesting start love. I shall look forward to reading more of this. :)

hawk_soaring April 27 2007, 20:27:29 UTC

Ooh! Intriguing beginning. Can't wait for more.

submergedmemory April 27 2007, 23:07:19 UTC

Great start! (I'm actually reading this over at the BSV, but since I'm not a member, I thought I'd comment here.) :)

twilightschild9 April 28 2007, 04:11:29 UTC

Many thanks for commenting ;)

basilio_the_cat April 29 2007, 15:15:36 UTC

I have probably commented for this chapter already in an archive somewhere, but I'm going to do it again.

I liked the start and especially the ending lines.

Well done :D

twilightschild9 April 30 2007, 03:50:56 UTC

Many thanks, very glad you like it.

youbegoodbaby May 26 2007, 23:06:21 UTC

Interesting start!...told you that I would drop by when I got the chance. I get so emotional when I think of Buffy abusing and using Spike...I kindof like her in her depressed and dark moods. Next chapter...