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The Worst Betrayal: Straight Shooter (17/?)

Jun 21, 2007 01:56

Title: The Worst Betrayal ( Read more... )

Comments 12

ldyavalon June 21 2007, 18:10:17 UTC

Ha, I caught up!

I'd read this soemwhere else, but forgot where to keep up with it. But now I've reached where I had stopped reading.

And Buffy's right. It was too quick

twilightschild9 June 22 2007, 22:06:15 UTC

Yep, too quick. But who's to tell the daughter he's wronged that he can't be killed yet?

isildae June 21 2007, 19:30:06 UTC

I LOVED this chapter! Everything's escalating, and I have hope that soon they'll free the slaves and get back to Sunnydale!

I surely hope so anyway, although I fear Spike wont recover quickly, even with Buffy at his side.:(

twilightschild9 June 22 2007, 22:05:24 UTC

Very glad you've enjoyed this chapter.
Don't worry, answers to come.

hawk_soaring June 22 2007, 00:47:31 UTC

wow -- intense. Love this!

twilightschild9 June 22 2007, 22:06:59 UTC

Very glad ^_^ More to come soon.

krezy_ket August 5 2007, 17:46:01 UTC

Fabulous story!!! Found it a while ago, just finished reading as far as it is written, and am now wondering (since the last update has happened a while ago): Are you going to continue this plot? I'd love to read more soon!!!
Thanx!

Want more lol anonymous September 3 2007, 16:56:30 UTC

Hi, hon
Soo totally luv this story but didn´t see it was a WIP when I started, been checking in since June to see if you added more.
I so understand that RL can put a hamper on things but thought I would put in my two cents in trying to nudge you a bit lol
Plzz keep up the good work
Hugs JM