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Fic - Sleepless Nights

May 10, 2012 20:33

Title - Sleepless Nights
Fandom - Star Trek (2009)
Rating - R
Pairing - Jim!Prime/Spock!Prime
Characters - Jim, Spock, Spock!Prime, Jim!Prime
Disclaimer - Don't belong to me. I wish they did, but they don't :(.
Summary - Jim has been having trouble sleeping, thanks to memories from the mind meld
A/N - Written for Day 09 of mmom. First time writing in this ( Read more... )

mmom_2012, rating: r, fandom: star trek (2009), pairing: jim/spock

Comments 5

elrhiarhodan May 10 2012, 13:06:51 UTC

Ah - just lovely. A perfect interlude with my morning coffee.

Thank you.

twilighthdfan May 11 2012, 12:30:45 UTC

Thanks! So glad you liked it and that it helped with your morning coffee ;). Love your icon :).

coffeethyme4me May 10 2012, 15:29:36 UTC

This is really hot. I loved Jim testing Spock's control -- wanting to be punished but maybe wanting Spock's anger more jut to be able to know that he's the one that can provoke it. Lovely!

There is one teeny question I had, and I wouldn't even bring it up but I do want to read more mind meld sex and hope you write more: wouldn't all of the memories be in Spock's point of view instead of Jim's? I don't mean to joss your fic with that! Like I said, I just want more. ;-)

twilighthdfan May 11 2012, 12:35:40 UTC

I think Jim loves pushing Spock just so he can see emotions that others can't get out of the Vulcan. So glad you thought it was hot! I'm never sure whether it comes across hot or flat so always glad to hear it was hot :).

There is one teeny question I had
LOL. I wondered if someone was going to ask. I actually wrote it from Spock's POV to begin with but I just can't get Spock's voice right when I write it. In the end I wrote it from Jim's as I figured Spock has some of Jim's memories and it could be plausible (in my head, probably not in canon) that Jim's memories would be the one's to come through in a meld when the meldee (if that's a word. LOL) was Jim.

If that makes any sense. LOL. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

coffeethyme4me May 11 2012, 15:15:17 UTC

Yeah, the fact that you had Spock meld Jim at the end of the sex makes that entirely plausible. And Spock's voice would be a challenge, although I think you totally had it in the dialogue -- for what it's worth!