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Fic - Caught

May 29, 2011 15:09

Title: Caught
Fandom: The Fast and the Furious
Pairing/Characters: Brian/Dom
Rating/Category: MA
Spoilers: For the fourth
Prompt: In Fast and Furious when Braga asks Dom and Brian if they know each other, what if instead of saying 'He used to date my sister' Dom decided not to make Brian's undercover assignment easy for him and mess with his head a ( Read more... )

rating: ma, pairing: brian/dom, fandom: fast and furious

Comments 40

_profiterole_ May 29 2011, 13:15:34 UTC

That was so hot! :D

twilighthdfan May 30 2011, 06:13:41 UTC

So glad that you thought so. I wasn't too sure about this when I posted it, so I'm glad you liked it :).

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :D.

mystik78 May 29 2011, 13:38:51 UTC

I would definitely like to read more of this. Excellent tension between the two. :-)

twilighthdfan May 30 2011, 08:12:47 UTC

So glad that you liked the tension between the two, I wasn't too sure whether it actually came across in the fic. So yay! that you liked it :).

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

ozhbo May 29 2011, 13:48:55 UTC

Oh my gosh..that was unreal! I love it! I'm glad I'm not he only one that picked up more "sexual" tension than the "she dated my sister" tension the movie tried to play off. Please write more...

twilighthdfan May 30 2011, 08:20:24 UTC

So glad that you loved it :). There's so much sexual tension between Dom and Brian I keep waiting for them to actually start making out. LOL.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I might continue on, but not sure yet ...

ariss_tenoh May 29 2011, 14:59:53 UTC

This is a brilliant take on that scene! I always thought it was so slashy. Love how you used that saying by Dom about the car make^_^

Will there be more?

twilighthdfan May 30 2011, 08:22:55 UTC

That line is one of my favourite in the movie, because really, most girls are the same 'make', so he's clearly saying that he swings both ways. LOL, at least that's my take on the scene. So glad that you liked this take on the scene :).

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Not sure whether I'll continue yet, but so many people want me to, so I probably will :).

supercaptain182 May 29 2011, 15:26:17 UTC

This prompt is inspiring the best fills. Love this!

twilighthdfan May 30 2011, 08:23:53 UTC

There are so many good prompts on the meme, but this one in particular jumped out at me. The other fill that anon made is brilliant as well.

So glad that you loved it :).