Fic - The Sleeper and Seduction, Chapter 3

[twilighthdfan]

A/N - LOL. So Jack’s just too darn charming in my books and I think it would be almost impossible to resist him for long; although Ianto will try. As always let me know what you thought :D.

Comments

[way_to_the_end]

Oh I love your Ianto. I always thought that he gave in too quickly in the TVShow when Jack came back so I'm really enjoying your fic, plus, I can't wait to hear what John will answer to Ianto's question or what Ianto will do. And I love the mystery around what happened to Ianto and I can't wait to read what's going to happen when him and John arrive at the warehouse.

[twilighthdfan]

I completely agree. With all the stuff Jack pulled, I would've liked to have seen Jack chase Ianto for a little while before they got back together (hence this fic, LOL). I hope you like what John has to say and I'm glad that you're enjoying the mystery around what happened to Ianto.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :D. More up very soon.

[zazajb]

Jack and John fighting over Ianto - mmmnnnnn delicious! I'd never be able to resist Jack... Great chapter :D xxx

[twilighthdfan]

I know. He's just too irresistible. Glad you're liking the fight over Ianto (I kinda wish this had happened in the show). Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. More up soon :).

[twilighthdfan]

LOL. I know, when I started writing this John and Ianto were only going to have that one kiss and then some friendly flirting (with Jack being jealous). But now ... I kind of like them too. That said, I'm a Janto girl all the way, and Jack will definitely make up for his being a prat ;).

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. More up soon :).

[twinsarein]

This is so awesome. I love the tug-of-war Jack and John have going. I'm glad that Ianto is feeling desired and wanted, finally. I don't think that's something he really got from Jack on the show. This is a wonderful fix-it.

The only trouble is, every time I read a chapter, I start getting the urge to write something with a similar theme with Clark and Lex as two of the characters. I'm not sure who the third would be - Jason, Bruce, or possibly Oliver. I have enough bunnies, darn it.

Still, a great chapter. It was nice to see Owen and Gwen stand up for Ianto, and I loved the kiss Ianto almost sank into with Jack, and the flirting in the car with John.

[twilighthdfan]

Yay! so glad that you're loving the tug-of-war for Ianto. I completely agree that he didn't really get that feeling of desire or want on the show (I always felt that Jack gave that more to Gwen, which annoyed me to no end). Thank goodness we can re-write what we want. LOL.

LOL. The bunnies can be so annoying, especially when you already have so many. But ooh, I'd love to see this from a Clark/Lex point of view. As for the third person ... I love all of them. LOL. I could see them all being in it.

Thanks so much. I'm so glad that you liked the almost kiss and the flirting. They were my fav parts to write :).

[musicaluvr]

Heh... found the sequel and am now straining at the bit wanting to find out what happens next.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Ianto caught up in the middle of a Jack/John tug of war. Should be brilliant to see how Ianto will re-act and then finally for Janto to be back together again. I'm definitely a Janto girl and that fact will never change.....

Thanks for sharing ;D

[twilighthdfan]

LOL. Poor Ianto having to choose between the two, it would be a hard choice. I hope you like the way Ianto reacts through out the story. And Janto will definitely happen, although Jack will have to work for it a bit ;).

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. More up soon :D.