Comments | twilighthdfan: Fic - The Sleeper and Seduction, Chapter 2

twilighthdfan

Fic - The Sleeper and Seduction, Chapter 2

Sep 16, 2010 19:39

Title: The Sleeper and Seduction
Chapter: 2/10
Rating - NC-17
Pairing - Janto (main), John/Ianto (a little)
Spoilers - 2x01 Kiss Kiss Bang Bang, 2x02 Sleeper
Warnings - OOC (just in case), violence
Summary - Jack tries to win back Ianto, but it won't be as easy as he thinks. Especially when Captain John Hart decides he wants the young welshman for ( Read more... )

pairing: jack/ianto, fandom: torchwood, rating: r, series: torchwood redux

Comments 24

wounded_melody September 16 2010, 12:11:14 UTC

Love this fic so far!!!
And this part is absolutely brilliant:
“Wait a minute. Torchwood isn’t your own team name?” Hart asked, grin crossing his face. “It’s like … a franchise? And you’re not number one?”
<3!

twilighthdfan September 17 2010, 10:41:58 UTC

LOL. I am so glad that you said that you loved that line. I wasn't too sure whether it was a Hart line or not (and almost took it out). So yay! for thinking it was brilliant and for loving this fic so far.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. More up soon :D.

PS - love the icon :D

way_to_the_end September 16 2010, 12:43:56 UTC

Ooooooooh things are getting interesting and I can't wait to see what will happen next and what's with the cuts and Ianto! Great story!

twilighthdfan September 17 2010, 10:44:02 UTC

Yay! so glad that you're finding this interesting. Ianto and the reason for the mysterious cuts to be revealed soon :D. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. More up soon.

gottabefierce September 16 2010, 15:05:40 UTC

I love your interaction between Jack and John, as well as Jack and Ianto. The tension is so beautiful ^_^, please give us more soon!

twilighthdfan September 17 2010, 10:46:04 UTC

So glad that you're liking their interactions. I always difficult to tell whether I've got it right, so yay! for loving it and for liking the tension :).

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. More up soon :).

PS - gorgeous icon. Whoever drew it is very talented :D.

zazajb September 16 2010, 15:44:38 UTC

Ooh, me likee! This has great character interactions and a really good mystery brewing...look forward to next bit *hugs* xxx

twilighthdfan September 17 2010, 10:58:41 UTC

LOL. Your icon is fantastic. Love it :D.

So glad that you're liking this, and that you're liking the mystery brewing. I hope that you like where it goes. And yay! for thinking the character interaction is good.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. More up very soon :D. *hugs*

zazajb September 17 2010, 15:40:07 UTC

Feel free to snag - credit is to 3xcereal if you do :D xxx

sariagray September 16 2010, 15:49:11 UTC

More please! The characterizations are spot on and I really love what you're doing with Hart. And I love that Ianto has to choose. And...yeah, just absolutely love it! :)

twilighthdfan September 17 2010, 11:00:15 UTC

Yay! I'm so happy that you think the characterizations are spot on. It was something I was a little worried about. And I'm so glad that you're loving Hart (he's become one of my fav characters to write). Poor Ianto, it would be hard to choose between those two men.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. More up soon :D.