Comments | twilighthdfan: Darkness and Light (3/6)

twilighthdfan

Darkness and Light (3/6)

Aug 05, 2010 21:06

Title - Darkness and Light
Rating - NC-17
Pairing - Clark/Lex
Summary - Every day the darkness within Prince Lex grows, slowly stripping away the light and goodness in the young man.

( “Lex,” Clark whispered, Lex’s eyes snapping open and staring into the open face in front of him, Clark’s desire and lust clear to see. )

rating: r, fanfic: darkness and light, pairing: clark/lex, fandom: smallville

Comments 2

ciaan October 11 2010, 19:46:05 UTC

The knock at the door shocked Lex out of his lust haze, pulling away quickly from Clark, swallowing hard at the disappointed groan he heard coming from the young man (or just ‘boy - ‘other’ seemed wrong, as I don’t think Lex would identify himself as a boy).

I think you left in an editing note there.

twilighthdfan December 2 2010, 12:37:59 UTC

Ooh, thank you! You read over a story so much that you miss some things. *goes off to fix it*.