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twilighthdfan

Darkness and Light (6/6)

Aug 05, 2010 20:46

Title - Darkness and Light
Rating - NC-17
Pairing - Clark/Lex
Summary - Every day the darkness within Prince Lex grows, slowly stripping away the light and goodness in the young man.

( “Then I best use it where it will do the most damage,” Edge hissed, the grin turning into a vicious smirk, as he raised the dagger, plunging it into Clark’s chest, right over the heart. )

smallvillebigbang2010, rating: r, fanfic: darkness and light, pairing: clark/lex, fandom: smallville

Comments 19

amcnh August 5 2010, 15:35:18 UTC

Congratulations on finishing this story. I really enjoyed it. Job well done.

twilighthdfan August 6 2010, 07:14:10 UTC

Thanks :D. I was so happy when I finished (it was a lot more difficult then I first expected). So glad that you enjoyed it :). Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

fruitbat00 August 5 2010, 20:15:43 UTC

WOW I have to say I loved this. With some AU's I have a problem visualising the characters in their alternate time line/roles etc.... But I got caught up in your story and I could SO see Lex as a Knight (and Bruce). And I must admit Lex looked VERY hot...errr....nice...in my mind anyway *g*

A VERY enjoyable read.

twilighthdfan August 6 2010, 07:20:48 UTC

Yay! so glad you loved it. And I completely agree about the whole AU thing. Sometimes I see it and sometimes I don't. I'm glad you could see Lex and Bruce as knights in this :D. (and picturing Lex in armour was something that distracted me while writing ... mmm).

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :D.

miss_tress August 6 2010, 00:36:22 UTC

*claps* Wonderful! I've always been fond of AUs and this was a fantastic example of one. You packed so many great details into your story!

twilighthdfan August 6 2010, 07:22:32 UTC

*grins* So glad that you liked it and thought it was a good AU. And, yay!, for liking the detail. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

ctbn60 August 8 2010, 00:59:29 UTC

This was totally wonderful!!! I adored the thought of Clark being the light for Lex's darkness. I'm happy he had Bruce and Oliver on their side as they made a really good team. I adore fics about knights and this was was great. It was visual and really enjoyable to read! Nicely done.

twilighthdfan August 11 2010, 10:16:07 UTC

Yay! so glad you liked it :). I'm glad you liked the idea of Clark being Lex's light. I think that he was Lex's light on the show too, but it didn't turn out for the best there :( (no matter how much I try to convince myself).

And I'm a fan of Lex having Bruce and Oliver as friends (cos those three would be formidable if they were ever on the same side).

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. So glad that you liked it :D. And I love your icon. So pretty.

tasabian August 10 2010, 03:11:19 UTC

Clark being Lex's salvation and Lex trying so hard to do the right thing and resist him is very sexy!

“Clark,” he said, voice hard. “What happened last night, it can’t … it won’t happen again?”

“Really?” Clark asked, a small smile on his face.
Heh, I love how Clark often seems to be the older & wiser one in this story! He reads Lex so well.

Lucas walking in on Clex in bed and getting traumatized was very funny!

twilighthdfan August 11 2010, 10:19:29 UTC

Lex tried very valiantly to resist, but there was no chance once Clark decided he wanted Lex too (I don't think anyone would've been able too). I like the idea of an older and wiser Clark in stories, so I'm glad you liked it too :). And, LOL, I couldn't resist having a traumatized Lucas in there somewhere.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. So glad you liked it :D.