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Fic - Death Repeated (6/6)

May 22, 2010 18:08

Title - Death Repeated
Chapter - Epilogue (6/6)
Prompt - Groundhog Day
Character/Pairing(s) - Janto
Rating - NC-17 (only really for one chapter)
Warnings - death, ANGST (*cough* lots of the two *points to prompt as explanation), fix!it fic
Spoilers - For COE (specifically day 4 but pretty much all) and The Year The Never Was
Summary - Jack can’t tell ( Read more... )

pairing: jack/ianto, fandom: torchwood, fanfic: death repeated

Comments 22

angstosaur May 22 2010, 12:06:43 UTC

that was brilliantly done - I loved the thoughts running through Jack's mind of how he could save Ianto ... and the ambiguity of the ending is perfect as it leaves it up to Jack to make things different

twilighthdfan May 23 2010, 02:43:02 UTC

Thanks :D. So glad you liked it. I wasn't too sure about writing from Jack's POV, so I'm glad that you liked the thoughts that he had running through his end. And, yay!, for liking the ending. I wasn't too sure how people would find it, so I'm glad you thought it ended well.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :D.

milady_dragon May 22 2010, 13:59:32 UTC

That was great. Poor Jack, having to relive Ianto's death over and over again...yet, now he has a second chance. Makes you wonder what he's going to do with it...

twilighthdfan May 23 2010, 02:45:50 UTC

Thanks :D. It certainly couldn't have been easy for Jack to relive the death, but it did show him how much he cared for Ianto and a second chance to do something about it.

Thanks for reading and reviewing :D.

fide_et_spe May 22 2010, 14:59:52 UTC

AAh but how do we know the end isn't just the dream over again? I really like that you have used the groundhog day idea as a kind of fix it, but yes it was angsty. I think it has great potential for a sequel looking at how Jack manages to do things differently this time, and can he make it work.

twilighthdfan May 23 2010, 02:49:22 UTC

LOL. I hadn't even thought of that (although in my mind it was for real this time). Glad you liked how the plot was used and I was surprised at how angsty this was (which I hadn't intended when I first started). Once I finish the sequels for my other stories, I might come back and write one for this (like you said there's a lot of potential)

Thanks for reading and reviewing :D.

fide_et_spe May 23 2010, 07:23:35 UTC

Oh how funny, I thought that was what you meant by the end being ambiguous.

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twilighthdfan May 23 2010, 02:50:05 UTC

Thanks :D. So glad that you liked it.

PS - I love your icon. So adorable.

thrace_adams May 23 2010, 03:48:27 UTC

I've saved this to read later when RL has slowed down a bit...looks like it will be REALLY good.

twilighthdfan May 24 2010, 07:00:16 UTC

I hope you enjoy it when you do :D. Let me know what you thought when you get the time :)